Oh, how I would love for you to continue this, bring us onto Julie's party and Henry coming home and the ring ceremony and all the rest, but at the same time, this is just so lovely, just as it is, it would almost be a shame to change one single thing.
Comparing Tami and Julie to an unstoppable force and an immovable object is the absolute most perfect, wonderful metaphor for them I've ever heard.
Oh, thank you so much for this feedback! I'm glad the story left you wanting more, but that you're happy with it as it stands. And thanks so much for complimenting that metaphor for Julie and Tami. I wondered if it were too much--and super glad that it wasn't! :)
that was very excellent writing, very beautifully done! your fic really captured the relationship of Julie and Tami after Coach left for Austin perfectly (the "between an unstoppable force and an immovable object" description of mother & daughter was spot on, as was Matt's seeing Julie as "words"!)... and how the growing tensions crept their way into Matt's relationship with Julie. it's such a realistic view of the way things were before season two began! and anything well-written with Matt at the center is incredible... you wrote his thoughts and feelings--the bitter & the sweet--about his life after State amazingly! I loved this and hope to read its continuance soon!
Thanks so much for your feedback! I really appreciate it. I'm glad you liked the story and felt like it showed Matt and Julie and Tami's post-State relationships and thoughts believably. Thanks for appreciating the descriptions you pointed out--I liked those too. :)
Hearing that it felt realistic is really high praise. I'm so glad that you thought that the way tensions grew was natural. I don't know if I'm going to continue it, but if I do, you'll be sure to hear.
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Comparing Tami and Julie to an unstoppable force and an immovable object is the absolute most perfect, wonderful metaphor for them I've ever heard.
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and anything well-written with Matt at the center is incredible... you wrote his thoughts and feelings--the bitter & the sweet--about his life after State amazingly!
I loved this and hope to read its continuance soon!
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Hearing that it felt realistic is really high praise. I'm so glad that you thought that the way tensions grew was natural. I don't know if I'm going to continue it, but if I do, you'll be sure to hear.
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