Comments | k155_me: Love Like Winter

k155_me

Love Like Winter - HPDM

Dec 22, 2006 07:27

Hey all, here is the Creature one-shot I promised you all ages ago and then got distracted by Mirror Image and it’s sequel Blurred Reflections ( Read more... )

oneshot, songfic, harrypotter, harrydraco, dracomalfoy

Comments 22

nohara_megami December 22 2006, 07:54:48 UTC

I have to say, that when Malfoy was worried about a Weasley being his mate, I thought that was one of the most funniest things I have read in a while lmao I have no idea why, but the thought that he was worried about that specific thing during the pain he was in was priceless lol

Very, very good stuff by the way^_^

k155_me December 22 2006, 07:55:54 UTC

thank you very much lol ^^

me_276 December 22 2006, 14:39:46 UTC

iv actualy red a full chapter 4 1st time in ages!!! go me :-)
so as usual... dat was fukin deadly ais! c ya!!

k155_me December 22 2006, 18:39:08 UTC

thanks ^^

mister_monday December 22 2006, 17:31:27 UTC

Love Like Winter is SUCH a wicked song!

k155_me December 22 2006, 18:39:15 UTC

isnt it just? ^^

mister_monday December 22 2006, 20:16:20 UTC

Hey! We need to talk on msn before Christmas! Hmmm can you do Saturday (tommorow) but not after 5:30?

k155_me December 22 2006, 20:22:52 UTC

mmm.. i think im free. i'll text you around... 12? will you be on then?

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sandyra_kay December 22 2006, 20:22:30 UTC

hehe I usually hate songfics, but this worked extraordinarily well. And I totally had the song on repeat while I read it. It's wonderful. Song and fic, I mean. ♥

k155_me December 22 2006, 20:23:51 UTC

thank you! lol :)

im glad you liked it

megyal December 23 2006, 01:28:06 UTC

I haven't finished reading it yet, and I like the plot of it so far; but I think I'm not really into the way you describe things, in place of telling the story. Maybe its a personal view...but some parts, for example this line: Over 80% of his wings were silver feathers, and 20% - close to where they grew from his shoulder blades - were emerald green scales., sort of pulled me away from the flow of the story. I think it might have sounded better this way: Most of the wings were of a silver colour, but close to where they grew out of his shoulder blades, a single line of emerald feathers marched down....I hope you get what I'm trying to say, that the descriptive writing is possibly too descriptive, if there was such a thing ...I suppose that I hate maths enough to not want to see the percentage sign...=]...I'll just go finish reading...and strange enough, "Love Like Winter" just finished playing and "Silver and Cold" started...

k155_me December 23 2006, 12:59:48 UTC

i suppose.. i love your icon btw