Mother's Worry

[juxtaposie]

            Barely a week after Zuko turned five he broke his arm falling off the railing on the garden veranda. The healers all agreed that the fracture wasn’t a bad one, and assured the boy’s mother that it would heal before the season was over. They didn’t bother assuring his father, because Ozai was unconcerned with such things. The healers

Comments

[sistermagpie]

Yikes! It's scary how I believe this--and I love what you've done with Ursa's pov.

[juxtaposie]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed!

[schellibie]

You captured the family dynamic rather well. :]

[juxtaposie]

Thank you! That's awesome to hear, considering how long this piece too (or didn't take, as it were).

[juxtaposie]

Lol, thank you! I'm happy you think I hit the mark!

[tehlobster]

I find this completely believable. And I enjoyed it. ^^

[juxtaposie]

Thanks!

[qwi_xux]

O_O That was chilling. Just absolutely chilling. Granted, yes, Azula was three and all three-year-olds push their siblings at some point or another. I don't blame her, but OZAI. Guuuuh, that he would just watch and not do anything just gave me such shivers.

[juxtaposie]

There is no doubt in my mind that Ozai decided real early on how he wanted things to be, and those plans definitely didn't include Zuko. Just wanted to showcase the little idea. Glad you enjoyed!