End of Obsession, Ch. 20

[juwel_fic]

Title: The End of Obsession, Ch. 20
Author: juwel_fic
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 4787 words this chapter
Pairings/characters: Severus/Harry (main), also Severus/Lucius, Severus/Draco, past Voldemort/Severus and Voldemort/Lucius, hints of Draco/Harry
Summary: Snape has always been obsessed. Now that the war is over, it's time to get over that little

Comments

[ldydark1]

Loved this!!
I loved Harrys emotions and his questions.
The sensations and descriptions were marvelous.
The descriptions of one anothers cocks emphasized
much. I esp. loved the paragraph of Harry screaming.
I could practically feel, taste, and see all that
was happening. I really am enjoying this series.

[juwel_fic]

yay, glad that you loved it! I tend to write sex very graphically, because to me it's the details that are important (not to mention the emotional context, lol!)

I'm working on the next chapter, although I think my progress is going to be a bit slow as I'm working on some of my own projects as well. (including a Snarry Big Bang, heh)

[ldydark1]

I think what you wrote is so important.
I am finishing reading a novel. It is great.
The author spent alot of research and time
with various aspects of the novel. But,
when the time came for the intimacy, I was
disappointed. It was practically glossed over,
and practically no detail. If one goes to the
length of setting up a relationship, the intimacy
is part of the pairing. I don't need dirty, graphic
smut. But, the sexual physical intimacy and pleasure
is a part of the relationship that should not be
overlooked. Also, what the character is feeling, or
not feeling, can be a tremendous inlook into the
relationship and the story. Just my 2 cents..

[juwel_fic]

I've had the same problem when reading other fics--the rest of the story was great, but the actual intimacy was glossed over.

Lol you definitely won't find that here.

[juwel_fic]

lol thanks!!! My work is is finished. (no not really, lol)

[shadownitewolf]

Ohhhh! I loved this! Truly enjoyed it!

[juwel_fic]

Glad you enjoyed! Working on the next chapter. :)

[suzannescotgirl]

Definitely worth waiting for! I so needed a Snarry smut fix today and this one was fabulous! I am loving this story, can't wait to read what happens next!

[juwel_fic]

lol happy that this fit the need, then. I'm working on the next chapter, albeit a bit slowly. Should have an update up next week. :)

Greetings!

[suzannescotgirl]

I am so pleased that you added me as a friend!

I hope you're doing well today, jewel_fic.

Are you writing a Big Bang fic? If so, do you know about the chat room?

If you're invested, let me know, I'll send the link.

Have a super day!

Suzannescotgirl

[aniay]

Yes...
well...

I...
Erm...

This...

GUH!

I had been craving Snarry(And I didn't read any HP in ages), I decided to read your fic... now I wish there was more.

This is one of the most delicious and IC Snapes EVER, and I love how you take care of little plot details like leaving the house open or the mirror still enchanted.(only one detail that didn't work for me)

I like how dominating in the best possible way your Snape is. He is just perfect!

Add to that you manage to convey the emotions that I ca taste them. That descriptions of characters or their inner thoughts are so vivid, tangible.

Then there is sex. OMG THE SEX! It's so deliciously hot and amazingly thrilling. You can taste the ZING, hear it feel it, smell it.

It's tastefully graphic, deliciously loud, full of movement and bursting with emotion.

I'm so glad I stayed up to finish this fic. I only wish I had more words to tell you how much I enjoyed reading it. (And I will stalk you/comms for more)

Awesomely delicious.

*loves*

[juwel_fic]

Glad this fit your need for good Snarry! My number ONE pet peeve about a lot of Snarry fanfic is that Snape just doesn't sound or act like himself. I just can't stand a romantic or nice Snape. A lot of what I love about him is he's a jaded grouch.

As I mentioned to another reader above, my second pet peeve is sex that is glossed over or not handled realistically, so I really strive to make my sex scenes vivid and real.

I figured the mirror was a workable enchantment in the HP world because it had a precedent--the glass fragment where Harry kept seeing Albus's brother in Deathly Hallows. We're also never told how exactly Snape knows of where Harry is in order to deliver the sword to him, so that worked for me as well, as an explanation.

I'm close to finishing the next chapter, with more sex, lol! Thanks for your review.