Hard Time, Chapter 2: Dreams and Nightmares

[juwel_fic]

Title: Hard Time, Ch. 2/?
Author: Juwel (juweldom@yahoo.com)
Pairings: Draco/Harry (Draco-centric) implied Voldemort/Lucius
Rating: Adult (NC-17)
Catetories: romance, hurt/comfort, kink
Warnings: SPOILERS for DH, compliant with DH except for the epilogue. Warnings for rape, submission and domination, and mentions of child abuse.
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[thrnbrooke]

Draco doesn't realize he can't be denied food. I can't believe the guard! Poor Draco! Why doesn't he fight back?

[juwel_fic]

simple--fear. After two years under Voldemort's active interest, and without a friend in sight, Draco's given up. And of course there's always an enemy to be defeated in any story. In this one it's not so much Pucey or Goyle. It's his own fear.

[thejennabides]

I think the only thing that saves this from being absolutely gut-wrenching for me is the comment I saw you make to someone in chapter 1, about Harry showing up in chapter 3. But of course Draco doesn't have access to that knowledge, so I'm gut-wrenched on his behalf. This is particularly painful:

He faced Dumbledore down, knowing with despair that Dumbledore was right, that he was a coward, too afraid to kill, too afraid not to kill, to afraid to move, or to even think.

Oh, Draco! That's not what Dumbledore meant at all. Makes me want to give him a muskrit chin hug and a cuddle.

Caught a few typos, which I hope you don't mind me letting you know about:

"Save us, Draco, Bring our family honour back."
- should be either "Draco. Bring" or "Draco, bring"

“Duck!” Screamed Harry
- should be "screamed"

Draco ggged
- should be "gagged"

[juwel_fic]

thanks for the catches! lol it figures they came during the rewrite suggestions from the beta (well 2 out of 3 anyway.)

Draco could definitely use a muskrit hug right now. *g*

[thejennabides]

D'oh!

*muskrit chin hugs for Draco AND you!*

[juwel_fic]

oh and um erm . . . yes, Chapter 3 is in Harry's POV.

But don't expect any big rescue for a few more chapters. More evil in store for poor Draco.

**accepts the muskrit chin hugs anyway** :D

[ura_hd]

Very interesting story.

I kind of hoped that Draco had more pride that giving a blow job in public even if it was for food.

How come Goyle does not own Draco a life debt for saving his live in RoR?

[juwel_fic]

While Draco did help Goyle from stumbling in the RoR, it was Hermione who dragged Goyle onto her broom to save him from the fiendfyre. Goyle blamed Draco for Crabbe's death, since always they had followed Draco's directions on everything. So at this point, he's in deep mourning, and he just doesn't care what happens to Draco.

And pride is pretty much dead in poor Draco at the moment. (though don't worry, it'll return)

Thanks for the fb!

[sweety167]

He was just a lost child who knew that the monster in the dark was real and that he’d never be safe. I love that line. And it sums up so much really.

[juwel_fic]

Thanks! Yeah, it does. *hugs Draco*

[crazybeutuiful]

Oh, poor Draco. I hope he doesn't have to endure too muc more from his so called former friends.