I want to be Shaz when I grow up!

[justspaz]

Three drabbles, all PG-13 or less.

Fandom(s): Life on Mars, Ashes to Ashes.

Comments

[newbie1990]

HURRAH FOR DRABBLES!

I rather love the title of the first drabble, and I love how you've given Shaz so much depth.

'and her pink sweater' is insanely sweet.

I love 'like plonks and hairspray', because it is an amzing, entirely Chris-like simile.

I love the listing, and just the whole idea of how people reacted to Sam's death, and your wording is beautiful, oh man.

And! 'Ray after a tit grab gone sour' is beautifully LoM, and 'Sam Tyler and dead together in the same sentence' is heartbreaking, as is that final sentence. Oh Chris ♥.

'like a preteen girl' is utterly sweet, and 'gave her a little twist' is PROBABLY THE MOST ADORABLE THING EVER, and '"cautious"' mostly just makes me want to hug Chris A LOT.

Also, Geeene ♥.

[justspaz]

I do what I can.

I love making up canon for characters, and Shaz deserves that depth.

Thank you! I tried to fit loads of different things into 100 words on that second one.

I totally could imagine that, just in my mind, Chris doing those little motions because he is awesome. My Chris fangirl loves to break out madly and dance around.

:DD

[xnicholle]

"The WPC work she does might seem secretarial, but Shaz has her mind, and her pink sweater, set on greatness."
I love this line!

And this title: Living is Feeling, but Chris feels like death

:)

I just went back to your last post and:
"I cried at the end of it, true facts, when Gene was in him office and looked at the newspaper clipping. Not just silent tears, loud gasping ones."
Oh my God, so did I. It was messy. :(

[justspaz]

Thank you very much! I generally have generic one word titles, but I was like 'change'. Or something. :D

I then started to tear up looking at icons of that scene. It is not a happy thought at all. :(

[webeh]

Gene almost felt bad about interrupting them for a robbery case.

LOL!!! This Gene is almost a softy.