Last Star Falls (1/1)

Sep 11, 2008 23:17

Title: Last Star Falls
Author: jawice24
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Ryan/Brendon
POV: Third
Summary: End-of-the-world-AU. “I wish there still were trains,” he says quietly. “We could probably use some luck.”

Brendon pulls his hand away from Ryan’s, then moves it so that he can properly take Ryan’s hand and really entwine their fingers. “Maybe we’re not that ( Read more... )

ryan/brendon, nc-17

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clairejw September 11 2008, 23:18:13 UTC
Beautiful, bb. So beautiful.

How come you deleted your journal?

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justsmilemore September 12 2008, 05:04:56 UTC
thank you <3

ah, i just needed a break, i'll be back soon enough :)

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clairejw September 12 2008, 07:55:10 UTC
fair enough.

Miss you already <33

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justsmilemore September 12 2008, 13:16:37 UTC
I'm sorry :( I didn't mean for anyone to worry or anything

<33

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slashxmistress September 12 2008, 14:43:11 UTC
Ohhhh -this is going to take a minute- I'm kinda speechless atm.

This kind of story always gets to me. It's kind of a hard theme to write I think, because you have to preserve a little bit of hope- but you can't really have a "happy" ending or it's just not honest.

I love the balance you gave this. I love the idea that even at the end of the world- you can still fall in love. I love the idea that humanity doesn't give up until the bitter end.

This is just a lovely job - and of course now I'll always think of this when I hear that song /o\

I'm glad you're back! You scared me!

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jawice24 September 12 2008, 20:19:59 UTC
wow, thank you for your wonderful comment <3

yeah i'm glad to be back, i didn't mean for anyone to worry or anything :( i just needed a little break i guess. thank you for caring :)

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jawice24 September 12 2008, 20:20:25 UTC
thank you so much! :D

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xlove_liesx September 12 2008, 18:16:15 UTC
This was so beautiful. Amazing. Fantastic. You name it.
But yeah, the beginning was scary indeed. Not like it was a bad thing or so.. It was beautiful too.

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jawice24 September 12 2008, 20:21:21 UTC
thank you! i'm glad you think so :)

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heart_4_heart September 12 2008, 21:31:26 UTC
Wow. Just wow. This was absolutely amazing. I started crying half way through it. I definitely shouldn't have listened to "Iris" while reading this. Ugh. This is so amazing and it made my heart hurt. I honestly have this ache in my chest. It's so amazing. I had to start writing a poem because I was so messed up after reading this. You're awesome! I love the last little bit the most. Gosh... so amazing. ♥

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jawice24 September 13 2008, 17:46:23 UTC
wow, thank you! it's great to hear that my writing is touching~ people and just. ashdjsa thank you <3

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