katekyo hitman reborn; colonello/lal

Mar 21, 2011 01:03

Title: You Were So Easy To Love
Originally Written: March 21, 2011
Inspiration/Prompt: Pablo Neruda's Sonnet XVII
Genre: Romance and Alternate Universe
Rating: PG

...without complexities or pride )

katekyo hitman reborn, katekyo hitman reborn ♥ colonello/lal

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petiteloutre March 21 2011, 07:25:41 UTC
Thank you so much for the review, Kate ;w; I'm glad that I managed to nail the idea spot on and I am probably a bit too proud of this tale.

I'm glad that it managed to make your heart swell up a bit ♥

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storm_obsession March 21 2011, 13:48:42 UTC
That wasn't bad at all. Well described details and all that. :D
Of course, if I'd asked you to show us what happens in a couple of months, that would just be me being selfish. :)

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petiteloutre March 22 2011, 07:16:32 UTC
Thank you for taking the time to review! I really appreciate it. And I am afraid I am rather bad at making sequels (you know, the whole following through idea) but you never know; stranger things have happened :)

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ezcap1st March 21 2011, 13:58:31 UTC
AHH. You write Colo/Lal so beautifully! I really, really like all the subtle hints going on in there!

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petiteloutre March 22 2011, 09:11:28 UTC
Thank you so much for the review :) I'm glad you enjoyed the little hints; I'll admit they're probably my strongest ability when it comes to writing romance.

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rimabelz March 23 2011, 04:34:02 UTC
uwaaaaaah ;w; this fanfic was beautifully written *___* i loved how you used such words to make a great atmosphere <3

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petiteloutre March 23 2011, 19:24:55 UTC
Thank you so much for the review :) I'm glad I managed to get the atmosphere right; that's always the most important aspect to any story ♥

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nalorgoj November 1 2011, 17:10:51 UTC
I think that is right bout that. Nice info and thanks. Need to get in google feed.

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