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petiteloutre in justoffkey

supernatural; sam & dean

May 27, 2010 19:01

Title: Smile
Originally Written: September 19, 2009
Inspiration/Prompt: ---
Genre: Family, Wee!chesters
Rating: G

( Babies were interesting creatures and from day one, Sammy was the most fascinating thing Dean had ever seen. )

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Comments 14

nebulia May 28 2010, 15:04:51 UTC

*melts from cute*

eeeeeeeeeeeee this is so adorable and so them and so wonderful.

petiteloutre May 28 2010, 15:15:04 UTC

Wahh~ Thank you! :D It makes to so happy that you thought it was so them.

ahavaelwilhouse May 28 2010, 15:15:11 UTC

Awwwwwwww!

petiteloutre May 28 2010, 15:17:23 UTC

♥ :3

yumezaka May 28 2010, 17:13:18 UTC

Awww! How CUTE!! At least Dean has Sammy's full attention.
My brothers were always staring somewhere else.LOL

petiteloutre May 28 2010, 17:15:00 UTC

Thank you! :D and that just gives your brothers their own category of cuteness

veiw13 May 28 2010, 21:47:47 UTC

Really cute!

petiteloutre May 28 2010, 22:51:41 UTC

Thank you :)

cookiemom6067 May 28 2010, 22:43:00 UTC

So sweet - I can really see this happening.

Since you asked for concrit:

"Turning his own adolescent face toward his younger brother"

At 4, Dean would in no way be an adolescent.

petiteloutre May 28 2010, 22:56:18 UTC

Wonderful to hear :)

Ahh, thank you for the critique, I appreciate it! Though in this case, it was kiiiinda a hidden metaphor but still, it is a rather old word to choose, huh? Perhaps juvenile would have been a better fit.

I'll remember to keep an eye out for that next time, thanks! :D