NCIS/TS Fic: The Cost of Divorce 9/?

[justjeanette]

The Cost of Divorce

Rating: FRT

Pairing: Jim/Blair: Established relationship. Jim/Gibbs: Past Relationship. Gibbs/DiNozzo pre-slash.

Summary: An NCIS agent, a Baltimore detective, a Sentinel, a Guide, a serial killer.  What more do you need?

Chapter Summary: Gibbs kicks like a mule. ~.^

Disclaimer: This story is based on

Comments

[ferneberga]

Argh! What a cliffie! Please update soon

[justjeanette]

Working on it while I write a paper as well. Very Evil Grin™ (patent pending)

[ladyivy]

Oh, why do I have a sense of foreboding about this knowledge of Naomi Sandburg, and why Jim is asking Ducky about it...

Good to see another chapter in this, but I agree you can't just leave us hanging there for long!

Update soon, please?

[justjeanette]

I don't intend the next update to take as long.... ANd, foreboding, whyfor you worry about foreboding feeling.... >:D

[justjeanette]

Thank you.

[novalinx]

HA! I can't wait to see how Ducky reacts to that revelation! (esp. if what I'm thinking is right! Hilarious)

Right up... there *points* is one of the reasons I'm not fond of Abby, and I'm hoping it's actually fanfic portrayal, but I rather doubt it. In the middle of an investigation, she threatens to withhold information unless she's bribed first. That annoys me. But that's neither here nor there.

Lovely update, I love how complicated you've made the serial killer, was that hard to do?

I liked the fight between Gibbs and Jim, shows that even though Jim has super senses, he's still human, that bit rocked.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Thanks for sharing, happy writing, and update soon please!

Tabee :)

[justjeanette]

Hehheh.. Ducky is in for a suprise, me thinks.

Abby has been devolved a little in canon so that the behaviour I allude to is 'canon'. Which is why Jim does not want her about when he talks with Ducky; her reaction when he and Blair first appeared in the Bullpen was sufficient to put her on the back foot with Jim, as it were.

As for the serial killer, 10 years working as a forensic scientist has some advantages. I've had the oppurtunity to speak with the original FBI behavioural science people.

Keeping Jim human without turning him into a wimp, given the whole super senses thing, is a fair balancing act. I hope i'm getting it right but I'm more of a Blair babe and so tend to overcompensate with Blair. Still, these are a fun set of characters. :D

[rogue_psion2]

What a cliff hanger! I eagerly await the next section. :) I love how well the suspense and humor is written in each chapter.

[justjeanette]

Thank you.