fic: Refrain From Breaking My Heart (2/5?)

[justforfics]

Title: Refrain From Breaking My Heart (2/5?)
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Rachel/Quinn, side B/S, B/F, Q/P
Rating: Pg-13 I guess
Disclaimer: Not my characters. Just borrowing them.
Summary: Done for a Glee_kink_meme prompt: Quinn/Rachel. D.E.B.S style.
Spoilers: None. AU
AN: Thank you everyone who reviewed the last chapter :D Totally motivated me to

Comments

[felonious_skunk]

I really, really love the banter and relationship between Finn and Rachel (I totally see him falling asleep on the job). I pretty much laughed out loud when Brittany popped up in the back seat. Also, I'm kind of behind the whole Finn/Brittany thing (because they're both... dim), but I love the Santana aspect of the relationship (it would be interesting to see who Brittany ends up with).

Again, I really like this chapter.

Regarding the HTML thing, I'm clueless on how to go about fixing it. The spacing between the paragraphs are great, but the centered format really drives me crazy.

[justforfics]

I totally agree with you. The centered format was bothering me, but I wasn't entirely sure if I should ditch it or not. I decided I definitely needed to.

And thanks :3
I can't not see Finn and Brittany totally hitting it off, but now I'm torn because of my love for her with Santana!

[oomizvalentine]

I'm loving this story!! Please update more :)

[justforfics]

Thanks, and will do!

[darksyx]

Ok, Finn, Brittany and Rachel were completely hilarious in this. Specially Britt XD. And Quinn; she's going to fall so hard and it's fun to read her reactions. Also I love how you introduce characters here and there, like Tina in the first chapter and now the mention of Artie.

And then the making out... hot. That should have happened in the movie!

Other than that I think there's some typo, a theres for theirs can be? Not that I'm a expert, English is not my first language at all.

There's an easy way to justify the text, I don't know if you would like that format for the story, anyway I let it here, if it serves for something, great: < div align = "justify"> text (without spaces but the div align). It's what I usually use in my entries and the aspect is just fine. I remember in the FAQs of livejournal there's some tips about lj and html code too.

And again, great chapter. Time to shout my mouth.

[justforfics]

Thank you so much for pointing that typo out! And thanks for the HTML help. I am slowly getting it ;D

[the_lennox_fan]

Super duper awesome. I think I already like this better than the movie. :)

[justforfics]

Yess. Goal accomplished!

[kortneykaye]

So, um, WHY DIDN'T THIS HAPPEN IN THE MOVIE?

:D

Clearly, I loved every bit of this.

[justforfics]

There wasn't nearly enough groping going on in the real movie D: I felt I needed to fix that.