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phantmgreeneyes December 22 2008, 02:56:26 UTC
What a great story!! I liked the fact that it was almost an overview, a glimpse at moments with no great detail. And the ending was perfect.

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dreamingwriter December 22 2008, 04:20:56 UTC
I like to show the story and leave most of it for your interpretation. Because I've never been big on long, expounding detail and just the important moments should be enough to tell a story, hopefully a good one.

Glad you liked it!

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the_blue_fenix December 22 2008, 14:34:09 UTC
They're just plain inseparable, whether it's love or hate or driving each other insane. Good story.

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theonlytwin December 22 2008, 21:01:09 UTC
genius! sheer genius! the fact that she becomes a brilliant and slightly benevolant villain is so true, a sort of self fulfilling prophecy left over from the beardy parallel universe. i love the new kid being confused. i love ida saying something nice. this is just beautiful.

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