Forget and Forgive: Missing Memory (Chapter 2)

[just_unravel]

Title: Missing Memory (Chapter 2)
Series: Forget and Forgive
Author: just_unravel
Rating: PG
Pairings: Pre-Rayne

Comments

[ceslas]

Silly, stupid Mal. Too late to be articulate, but I like how you step back in time to establish a little prehistory to the next phase.

[guinny_hamilton]

Damnit Mal! *stops channeling Jayne*

This was cute. I like how River's reaching out desperately but can't speak up.

*hugs them both*

[bookaddict43]

Mal should know his plans never go well and rethinking it now is a bit late!

I loved both your chapters, the sadness and helplessness in both is so well written. Poor Jayne and River *cries*.