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Void

Nov 30, 2008 22:25

Title: Void
Author: rolleson
Fandom: Stargate SG-1
Rating: PG-13
Character/Pairing: Sam/Fifth, Sam/Pete, Sam/Jack
Spoilers: New Order
Warnings: None
Summary: AU insert for New Order
Notes: I messed around with the episode a bit. 1698 words.

( She couldn't see the bottom. )

stargate sg-1, sam/fifth, the fic

Comments 5

silerswench December 1 2008, 02:05:02 UTC

Intense, brilliant, visceral fic.

scruffyduck December 9 2008, 22:10:17 UTC

I don't think any of my fic has been called visceral before. Thank you.

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scruffyduck December 9 2008, 22:12:02 UTC

Thanks. That's pretty much what I was going for.

sela21k December 1 2008, 18:27:16 UTC

"I want to learn about all the things you would do with Pete. With other men," he said, "with other women."

She snapped her head back to look at him, eyes wide, he must have really delved into the back of her mind for that information.

"You're neither a man or a woman," she spat, "you're a machine."

"I have seen what you do with machines," he said, with a strange twist of his lips Sam thought was supposed to be a smile. "What you do, what you think, the sounds you make."

He moved closer and she found herself stuck at the edge of the cavern. he kissed her again and she tried to pull away, get away."

That is probably the creepiest passage of fanfic I've read in a long, long time. My stomach turned over and I actually shuddered.

Well Done.

scruffyduck December 9 2008, 22:12:47 UTC

Thanks. Really.