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Theory Of Convergence: Veronica Mars: V/L

Sep 29, 2008 22:54

Title: Theory of Convergence
Chapter: [11] Revelations
Author: tlace
Pairing/Character: Veronica/Logan, Veronica/Duncan, Logan/Lilly, with appearances by, pretty much, every Marsverse character ever
Word Count: 5550
Rating: PG-13 - drinking, suggested drug-use & adult situations.
Summary: WIP begins pre-series, Veronica’s birthday is the jumping off point ( Read more... )

ship: veronica/logan, title: theory of convergence, show: veronica mars, chapter: revelations

Comments 23

afrocurl September 30 2008, 15:45:27 UTC

The fact that Logan was able to convince Keith to let Veronica stay over made me melt a bit more (you keep doing that to me, you know, T.)

I have a strange fascination with the conversation Dick had with Veronica at this party about what happened at John's party and what is really going on with Logan's brain.

The fact that he's pulling away just as she's about to confess what's going on hurts, but I trust that you don't kill all of us readers with too nasty a fallout. (Or you better not, to be sure.)

tlace October 3 2008, 13:59:32 UTC

I MADE ROZ MELT!! WHOO!!! :)

We get a peek inside Teh Mind of Logan next chapter... which is kicking my ass like a bundt cake at the moment so it won't be to you until I get over one little hump.

I'm glad you trust me :) I won't let you down!

bliccy September 30 2008, 17:10:37 UTC

YOU'RE KILLING ME, SMALLS.

Honestly, that last bit was so HOT and THEY WERE JUST TOUCHING. GAAAAAHHHH. You need some sort of Good Samaritan award for writing this, seriously.

I really love it. And I will keep telling you I REALLY LOVE IT until it's finished! :)

tlace October 3 2008, 14:01:48 UTC

EEEEEEEEEEE!! Thanks! Yeah, must admit this part was fun to write!

And I am GIDDY that you love it!!!

christykq September 30 2008, 17:36:29 UTC

It's Christmas in September... and I am loving you ( ... )

tlace October 3 2008, 14:06:47 UTC

Thank you!!! HO HO HO!! Spinning heads and racing hearts... hmm, might have to use that as the title of the next chapter... and ENTIRELY FLATTERED I could cause that reaction :D

I have thought from the start that they are the others conscious in this whole situation. When one can't muster the strength to say "no" the other does. I think in this chapter though, it may be a little bit different, you'll have to wait and see ;)

I think everything they do together, say to each other, whatever at this point is changing their relationship.

You HAVE been good and even before posting these chapters I was working on the next so it is in process!

p2880 September 30 2008, 18:33:04 UTC

Your story and especially your writing just get better and better. The emotional build up in this chapter is fantastic! Logan's actions here really put an arrow straight through my heart. Bravo!

tlace October 3 2008, 14:10:00 UTC

Thank you!!! I am flattered by your comments (seriously!!) and a little proud that I've added some emotional build-up! I just hope I can continue to do so :)

havemy_heart October 1 2008, 14:08:32 UTC

Gah! So close! You hate me, don't you? I was so happy that Veronica finally started to admit how she feels, and they almost kissed! And then Logan has to be moral for once. He might as well have thrown a bucket of cold water on Veronica. Screw the Kanes! Be together!

Very interesting how Logan is winning Keith over. I like it.

tlace October 3 2008, 14:17:45 UTC

No, I ADORE you and you're patience with me and for all your nice comments :)

Logan has his reasons and yeah, I never want the Kanes to return BUT this is not meant to be AU so...

I think Logan sees a good father in Keith and Keith is one of those people who feels protective of kids even when, or maybe especially when, he can sense something broken about them.