Title: Time Of Dying- 7/?
Rating: 15 ish.
Characters: Ianto, Owen, Jack
Pairings: Ianto/Owen, Jack/Ianto
Series: Chapter Seven of “Lying My Way From You”.
Spoilers: If you haven’t seen “Reset” this is really going to spoil it for you.
Summary: Ianto has a bad feeling about the Pharm mission, but will it warrant anything? Especially when he
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But hide away from the angst all you like, I shall shelter thee from it. :P
But the banter, well of course I am beyond chuffed that you liked that, and it wouldn't be Ianto and Owen without the odd disagreement eh? :P Lol I was desperately hinting at that fluffy ending too, becuase at least it made writing the end a bit more bearable. :(
If only the sixth sense had worked though! *clings* (I bet your mum's comes in handy though :D)
Thank you!! Too lovely thee be to me. The last scenes were pure evil (as you know I love Owen almost as much as you do!) but at least there is the slight upside of him coming back. Kind of. *Wibbles* actually that isn't muc better....
But I loves thee to bits for this comment!! *hugs*
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I was impressed that the tension you created in chapter six was around unresolved issues and facing the unknowable. In this chapter the outcome was certain with clear signposts in the text increasing the unease and levels of apprehension.
Sorry not to have commented sooner but I’ve been out of touch for a while.
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Ahhh thank you, chapter six was a serious worry for me with all the lack of action, so that means alot! I'm also glad that you commented on all my clear signposts, as what I was finding difficult was building tension to an event everyone was expecting already! But seriously, thank you so much for such a lovely comment! And don't worry about commenting any sooner, it just means a lot that you read it at all! I hope things are all ok for you. :)
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