Rock My World (Chapter 3)

May 21, 2011 23:26

Pairing: JongKey
Rating: Soft NC-17
Genre: Rock musical!AU, Romance & Drama
Beta-ed by: desiderada
Disclaimer: I wish.
Summary: When Onew leaves the Korean production of RoA, Jonghyun is promoted to lead singer in his place and a new actor is also hired. Sparks fly, drama ensues - Rock & Roll.
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rating: nc-17, type: chaptered, genre: romance, pairing: jongkey, !fanfic

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gigiettu May 22 2011, 04:13:09 UTC
WOOT bathroom hand jobs i approve :D

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just2wings May 22 2011, 20:24:23 UTC
I do too :D
Thank you!

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mikssi May 22 2011, 06:00:03 UTC
More than anything, I loved the buildup to the bathroom scene and the scene in the dressing room afterward... that's not to say that the actual makeout and handjob wasn't great (because it was totally hot and I had to focus on breathing evenly at more than one point XD), but I loved that the sexual tension got to the breaking point gradually, you know? And I absolutely loved how shy and adorable they were afterward... it was straight-up precious. And of course, Jonghyun's reaction to the fact that he has no clue where they stand is perfectly realistic and a wonderful touch, because it has readers (me especially) wondering as well.

(And I get the feeling that Jessica is going to cause some problems in the future... /dread)

I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Kat

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just2wings May 22 2011, 20:31:23 UTC
I'm really happy to hear that because I was really concerned with making the build-up feel natural and for it to "flow". I didn't want the makeout scene to just pop out of nowhere, so your kind words make me very relieved and happy :)
(And let's not forget to breathe, everybody!)
I'm also glad you think it's realistic, as that was another concern of mine :D
Thank you and thank you again for your lovely comment ^^ I hope you'll like the rest!
<3

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brez_imena May 22 2011, 07:14:03 UTC
Gosh I like this fanfiction so much. :D And the bathroom scene! And everything. ^^

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just2wings May 22 2011, 20:32:27 UTC
Aww thank you so very much! I'm glad you enjoyed ^^

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hongjinri May 22 2011, 13:29:22 UTC
So, I just read this thing in one go and I wonder why I never read this before. I'll just sum up some random things, because it's easier that way.

1. Jjong with black nails is unf. I would like to see him with painted nails in rl.
2. I lol'd at that picture of Roo and the comments. She's super adorable!
3. Smut was awesome. Hand jobs ftw!
4. I dislike Jino in your fic. Lol.
5. I see evil Sica coming up.
6. You write very well and entertaining!
7. I like this fic ^^.
8. Congratz on finishing your exams!

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just2wings May 22 2011, 20:40:42 UTC
I agree for the black nails! Somebody should send him some nail polish anonymously as a fan gift xD
And Roo is the definition of cute. That and Shawols have a good sense of humour ^^ it made me lol too!
Hooray for hand jobs! //pervert
About Jino, to be honest I don't know much about him in real life. I just... needed a name, really. Same goes for Jessica xD
Thank you so much! For everything ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed and I wish you good luck for your own exams!

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just2wings May 22 2011, 20:42:33 UTC
Thank you! And I'll definitely try ^^

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