Comments | just2wings: Show Me Your Eyes, Don't Hide (Oneshot)

just2wings

Show Me Your Eyes, Don't Hide (Oneshot)

Aug 02, 2016 17:55

Pairing: JongKey
Rating: PG
Genre: Hurt/Comfort, non-AU
Summary: They all have their way of dealing; Jonghyun has always been introspective, drawing in on himself, reflecting. Kibum sometime wonders if it hurts him more than it helps.

( It wasn’t an uncommon occurrence to find him like this, staring into the mirror in front of him with a vacant expression on his face. In fact, it was becoming more and more common. )

genre: angst, type: oneshot, rating: pg, pairing: jongkey, !fanfic

Comments 18

pseudoideae August 11 2016, 01:43:50 UTC

thank you for writing this! i feel like a lot of fics lack jonghyun's multifaceted and complex personality, and it's rare to see someone successfully tackle these kinds of sensitive topics--but you wrote well! it wasn't cliche, and had a good mix of dialogue, actions, and thoughts. really nice!

just2wings August 11 2016, 03:43:00 UTC

It's rather hard to convey the depth of his character in fic, especially short ones. I tried, so thank you for your kind words! And I'm glad you thought I handled the topic well, thank you very much <3 I'm glad you enjoyed this!

life_not_knife August 15 2016, 13:59:26 UTC

This really pulled at my heartstrings! As always it was so beautifully written and Jonghyun's fragility came across so....real. I really loved this part in particular:

He could be both staggeringly honest and guarded, both overtly sensitive, even doubtful, and somehow still exude confidence. Kibum may have known him for years, but Jonghyun was the kind of person you spent a lifetime getting to know.

You captured his complexity so well, it really blew me away.

Thanks for this wonderful gem, it has left me kind of inspired!

Xx L xX

just2wings August 15 2016, 20:14:25 UTC

Jonghyun can be hard to write because there are so many facets to his person, it's hard not to get lost. I wanted to convey that in that paragraph, so thank you I'm glad you appreciated it! And I'm so flattered this could inspire you! Honestly, that is one of the best compliments, thank you <3

Hi again... life_not_knife August 29 2016, 09:12:57 UTC

SO, I said this inspired me and I was wondering. If I write a oneshot inspired by this and link you in the credits, would that be okay?? I've been itching to write it recently but I don't want anyone thinking I stole your idea, lol.

Thanks,

Xx L xX

Re: Hi again... just2wings August 29 2016, 22:20:55 UTC

That's fine! I appreciate the shout-out, thank you. And I'm glad this could inspire you! Let me know when you post it so that I can read it, too ^^

moshixd moshixd September 7 2016, 01:13:14 UTC

The end was so sweet <3
I loved reading it. Thank you darling

Re: moshixd just2wings September 7 2016, 03:00:28 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! And the ending! Thank you for reading <3