Where Are the Treats? (Chapter 8)
Pairing: idol!Key / student!Jonghyun
Rating: NC-17
Genre: General, Romance
Word count: 7492
Summary: Jonghyun’s job is rather unusual; dog sitting for an idol isn’t something most students pick up on the side. Only, what he expected to be a stroll in the park with two lovable dogs turns out to be much more than he bargained for.
( Maybe it’s a mixture of seeing Kibum take pleasure in his work despite the gruelling schedule it puts him through and of him actively trying to fill his days with things he actually wants to do. Jonghyun knows Kibum mustn’t have figured all this out overnight. )
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Right before my flight to poland omg i'm so excited
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“Not really,” Kibum admits, breath catching on the last syllable.
i know its kind of a small detail and i'm doing too much of it but I find this sooo important, like admitting that you are not okay is something i consider quite huge and it just points how close Kibum feels with Jonghyun to actually admit such a thing
This whole scene was really touching in general, i always cry when I see Kibum crying so I felt like Jonghyun :,)
I mainly loved how comfortable they feel around each other and how much they trust each other to have conversations like they had in that scene, its really heartwarming and i absolutely adored the fact that in the end of that scene they were feeling better and acting all cute again. It kinda shows how they bring each other higher and make the other feel better and in my opinion its one of the most important things in a relationship
“How would you feel if I neglected my work because of you?”
“You wouldn’t.”Oh nooooooooo ;;;;;;;;;;;;;; I swear it felt like 100 knives being thrown ( ... )
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im glad jonghyun is thinking about the whole settling down thing. he deserves to do what he loves
and YES to the make up sex lol <333333
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He does deserve to do what he loves ^^ and I'm glad you liked the make-up sexy times <3 Thank you so much!
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This. Was. Beautiful! As always. Even more so though because I got this kind of ache in my heart thrice when reading this. First when Kibum was crying...that whole scene, had my heart squeezing. Then again during the fight because it really broke my heart for a moment. Then again when Jonghyun realises how much Kibum really means to him.
Wonderful, just wonderful!!!
I was so excited to see this update. THANK YOU!!!!!
Xx L xX
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This was indeed an eventful chapter and a roller coaster of emotions, but I think I like this chapter all things considered! That first scene was important, but so was their fight in a way. And yes I'm glad you pointed that out, about Jonghyun's feelings running deep, because it's only a small sentence in this monster of a fic but it's important too!
Thank you so very much for such a lovely comment, I'm so happy you liked this update <333
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/SORT-OF-EDIT/ OK HOW AND WHEN DID THIS COMMENT POST. Anyway it posted apparently but on anon? Oookay then, lj. Okay then. G
I lovelovelove the part where Kibum finds him in his bed and then tells him about how he liked that. It just makes me imagine them being all domestic and perfect. Gah.. and when Jjong realises how much Kibum actually means to him. It has me leaking emotions on the floor.
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LJ is a very temperamental website, sometimes it just doesn't work for no reason... it's okay I don't blame you xD
Tbh, a big part of what I imagined when I set out to write this fic was to have them be domestic and cute... only it took me a lot longer than expected to get there. This is what happens when I don't plan everything ahead, I end up writing forever lol
I'm glad you pointed that out, about Jonghyun's emotions for Kibum because it's an important part of the chapter even though it's only a sentence or two!
Thank you so much, again I'm glad you're still enjoying this!
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