Where Are the Treats? (Chapter 7)

[just2wings]

Pairing: idol!Key / student!Jonghyun
Rating: NC-17
Genre: General, Romance
Word count: 8119
Summary: Jonghyun’s job is rather unusual; dog sitting for an idol isn’t something most students pick up on the side. Only, what he expected to be a stroll in the park with two lovable dogs turns out to be much more than he bargained for.

Comments

[life_not_knife]

As always, AMAZING!

I loved this chapter, it was just full of everything I was waiting for. I love how Jongkey's relationship is building and how the closeness is increasing. The smut was wonderfully written in a way that it just felt so right. Also, the small things that they both do in terms of body language is just wonderful. You describe the tiniest features of their face in such vivid detail that I can see it in my mind. Also, the small and somewhat unnoticeable things they say are just amplified and I feel like I know what the characters are saying implicitly without you having to spell it out.

Anyway, this was beautiful! Thanks so much for updating, this fic is going to go down in history as definitely one of my top 5 EVER fanfics, so thanks so much!!!

Xx L xX

[just2wings]

Thank you so much!! I'm glad this chapter had what you wanted ^^ it was about time for their relationship to progress lmao this fic has been going on a while already! I'm glad you liked the smut <3 I struggled a bit with the tone of the shower scene so I'm really happy to hear that. And I'm glad you like the descriptions too because sometimes I worry that this fic is a bit too heavy on the descriptive side so thank you! I have to admit sometimes I really like "showing" things instead of writing them out explicitly.
I'm so honoured you like it that much, honestly ;___; thank you so much darling <3

[minewnnie_leto]

Wooow I love it! Their relationship is perfectly imperfect <3 (Because it's still so new and all)! I hope that they will be able to meet more often and that they won't have too much troubles in the future! The rehearsal for Bonnie and Clyde was the best scene in this chapter haha. I can't wait for the next chapter!

[just2wings]

Thank you! I'm glad you like their relationship! I'm actually really surprised that your favourite scene is that one because it's one I had quite a few doubts about how I'd written it, so thank you very much, it means a lot. I'm glad you enjoyed <3

[shinee_princess]

I swear that I felt like I was catching a glimpse of a beautiful intimate moment for most of this chapter. I almost felt ashamed to read it because it felt so beautiful and peaceful and loving. I love how natural their relationship is and how the change was subtle from friends to lovers. I swear, dogs on the bed is the worst! I have 2 Goldens and they take up so much space. Aghghgheeh this chapter was so good and I love your writing and this just made my day so thank you so so much!

[just2wings]

That's such a nice compliment, thank you so much ;_; I can only hope to write in a way that makes the reader feel like they're getting a glimpse of the characters' lives. I'm really happy you liked the transition in their relationship, because that can be a little hard to do. Goldens are so much bigger though xD I feel you. At least two miniature poodles aren't so bad haha
Thank you <3

[kpopforlife]

OH MY GOD!!!!!!
my comments are becoming so incoherent and repetitive because my brain is just fuzzy with squeals of happiness.
the "i thought id never have this" talk just ruined me okay. poor bbs. please be happy forever.
also ARE YOU GOING TO GIVE ME SIDE ONHO? I SWEAR TO GOD I'LL DRIVE TO YOUR HOUSE AND BAKE U COOKIES AND KISS UR CUTE LIL FACE (in the least creepy way possible) IF U ARE GOING TO GIVE ME A SIDE OF ONHO AFTER ALL THIS PERFECTION.
UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

[just2wings]

Teehee I don't mind it, trust me xD squeals of happiness are very good too!
That line was important to me and I really wanted to include it and make an important moment out of it, so thanks for quoting it <3
There'll be more OnHo is all I can say! hehe Thank you so much darling <3

[narisa_rei]

sorry for haven't commented in a while. work is driving me crazy. anyway...

ahhhh~~~ i'm happy for kibum & jonghyun. they're perfect for each other <3
oh, i can see onho starts happening too. can't wait for more from both couple :D

[just2wings]

Don't worry about it, I know very well how life is! Thanks for dropping a comment still <3
I'm glad you think that ^^ but you'll just have to wait and see hehe. Thank you very much <3