Comments | just2wings: Where Are the Treats? (Chapter 5)

just2wings

Where Are the Treats? (Chapter 5)

Aug 30, 2015 17:35

Pairing: idol!Key / student!Jonghyun
Rating: PG-13 (for now)
Genre: General, Romance
Word count: 6405
Summary: Jonghyun’s job is rather unusual; dog sitting for an idol isn’t something most students pick up on the side. Only, what he expected to be a stroll in the park with two lovable dogs turns out to be much more than he bargained for.

( There’s still the lingering feeling of being in way over his head, but he also feels a slight thrill at the thought rather than the usual unsettling feeling that accompanies it. )

type: chaptered, genre: romance, pairing: jongkey, verse: doggies, rating: pg-13, !fanfic

Comments 57

shineegirluno1 August 30 2015, 22:34:44 UTC

THAT. WAS SO FLIPPIN CUTE. I loved it. If you haven't noticed haha
I am so excited for the next chapter :D

just2wings September 4 2015, 01:53:20 UTC

Thank you!! I'm glad you thought it was cute ^^
I appreciate the excitement <3 I hope you'll like it!

minkieshi August 30 2015, 22:48:22 UTC

oh my god? oh my god. OH MY GOD.
that was the cutest first kiss ;; i loved this chapter ;;

just2wings September 4 2015, 01:54:06 UTC

xDDD I'm glad you liked their kiss <3 and this chapter! Thank you for reading <3

woohyun_s August 30 2015, 22:51:25 UTC

I'm speechless .. really ! This is beyond perfect! I loved every single moment of this chapter ! The texting part was so exciting and cute and it seems so reaal with real selcas and stuff ! Oh god ! This chapter was just so heartwarming ;; ! Thank you for the amazing update ~ Keep up the good work <3

just2wings September 4 2015, 01:57:31 UTC

Wow thank you so much ;_; I'm glad you liked this chapter so much! I figured Key would send a lot of selcas when he texts... I was inspired hehe. Writing is going a bit slow now but I'll do my best, thank you!

shinee_princess August 30 2015, 22:52:38 UTC

Okay so um I'm really bad with this whole comment thing but I just wanted to say that I adore this story and that I found this chapter to be utterly amazing!!! I had to hide behind a pillow for several minutes after their first kiss. Anyways...I really like your writing style and your stories so...Good job!!!

just2wings September 4 2015, 01:59:48 UTC

You aren't bad with it at all, trust me <3 I appreciate any and every comment. I'm really grateful that you took the time to leave me such nice words! Thank you so much, I'm so humbled that you like my writing style ;____; really, thank you <3

anonymous August 30 2015, 23:16:39 UTC

I never comment on anything, usually... and I don't even have an account on lj...

But oh my godddd, I literally have no choice here. This fic is just my favourite thing ever (only to be matched by another of yours, with lil time travelling Jjong... also totally killed me). So, uh, basically you are the master of jongkey fic. Everyone should just bow down.

I'm not sure what else to write here, aha, except that this is seriously perfection (and your pretty much canon Key here is just too much for my Key biased heart) <3

just2wings September 4 2015, 02:04:15 UTC

Count me flattered! I really appreciate you taking the time to leave me a comment, I really value the feedback so thank you very much!

("Whenever" will always have a special place in my heart... thank you) I don't know about master but I certainly am a huge fan :D I just love them so much. dearest otp hehe

I'm so happy you (as a locket, even xD) find Key almost canon in this because I tried really hard to incorporate a lot of little details from his shows into this. Thank you so much for commenting, again, and I'm glad you're enjoying this <3