Where Are the Treats? (Chapter 2)

Jul 24, 2015 21:08


Pairing: idol!Key / student!Jonghyun
Rating: PG (for now)
Genre: General, Romance
Word count: 6262
Summary: Jonghyun’s job is rather unusual; dogsitting for an idol isn’t something most students pick up on the side. Only, what he expected to be a stroll in the park with two lovable dogs turns out to be much more than he bargained for.

It looks like his big sweater is swallowing him up with how he’s sitting, huddled up into a corner of the couch. In that moment, Jonghyun has no trouble believing Key is actually younger than him. He looks deceptively innocent like this, maybe even a bit naïve. )

type: chaptered, genre: romance, rating: pg, pairing: jongkey, verse: doggies, genre: fluff, !fanfic

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life_not_knife July 25 2015, 09:17:26 UTC
Everything about this chapter had me reeling....You always leave me with such a hungry appetite for the next chapter.

I don't want to wait for the next part, but I will... because I know it will be worth the wait.

The whole thing about Kibum's couch was kinda perfect because whenever I imagine his apartment, that couch is forever in the back of my mind... and now it holds such a sweet memory :D!

Ahhh, watching one piece and eating on the sofa, such a mundane experience but that is what made it kind of beautiful.

I loved this part too:

“No,” Key calls out rather loudly, halting Jonghyun. He really wishes he could see Key’s face better. “No,” Key repeats, back to his previous quiet tone, “I meant-I wanted to invite you.”

Awwwwwwh.....so cute!!! haha.

Anyway, thanks for writing and sharing this!!! I am really in love with this fic already!

Xx L xX

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just2wings July 29 2015, 19:05:05 UTC
That is such a huge compliment to me ;_; the fact that you look forward to the next part, thank you so much ;_____;

I'm sorry, I write really slowly and I was a bit blocked but hopefully I'll be back on track soon! I apologize for the wait between chapters OTL

I started writing this fic before Key's KnowHow was aired so I didn't know he had a gray couch irl back then xD but then the white couch became kind of an important part of the story so I just left it! All that to say that I'm glad you appreciate that couch lmao

Thank you for reading and commenting, and I'm really happy that you like this fic <3 thank you so much <333

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fluffynimeat July 25 2015, 09:49:59 UTC
Wow this fic is so cute! I really look forward to reading the next chapter. I love how you're building the characters and their relationships, nothing too rushed or anything I really do enjoy reading this. Thank you and good luck with the next chapter!

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just2wings July 29 2015, 19:06:22 UTC
I'm glad you think so ^^ and thank you I'm so happy you're looking forward to the next chapter! This fic does have a rather slow build. I didn't restrict myself word count-wise when I started it so it just kept growing lmao, hence the slower pace. I'm really relieved to hear you don't mind it!
Thank you so much <3

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just2wings July 29 2015, 19:07:24 UTC
Waaah thank you so much ;_; in love? That makes me so happy <3
I hope you'll like the rest, thank you <33

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moshixd July 25 2015, 18:04:46 UTC
omfg too cute! i already love their relationship
pls update soon <3 i will be waiting

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just2wings July 29 2015, 19:07:58 UTC
Hehe I'm glad you do!
I will do my best, thank you for your patience and thank you for reading and commenting ^^

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kibumrus July 25 2015, 20:45:32 UTC
oh god this story and this chapter are just too much for me apsgiidfsgjfd
this story is so unique and i'm in love with both jonghyun and kibum here SO MUCH, and Jinki is lovely too!
Don't even get me started about the domestic!jongkey you did in this chapter, this is like my ultimate weakness and I'm dead right now

"He pets the shivering ball of black fur, muttering nonsense in what he hopes is a soothing tone and drops a kiss to the top of his head when he suddenly notices Key watching him through the mirror" that's so cute how kibum was watching that adorable moment between jonghyun and the dogs ;;

"“Do you live under a rock?” Key says, looking a bit stunned, but mostly amused." i cackled. i LIVE for the fact jonghyun doesn't know anything about idols

Then the whole couch scene while watching one piece oh gosh why are you doing this to me so early in the storyyyyy. I don't think i will survive until the end of this story

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just2wings July 29 2015, 19:12:12 UTC
I'm so happy you like this fic and this chapter ;_; let me hug you
And I'm so glad you think it's unique!?!?!
What can I say, I can never resist domestic JongKey OTL it's one of my weaknesses too.

Jonghyun is a great dogsitter hehe at least Key got to catch a glimpse of it ^^

I hesitated making Jonghyun aware or not of pop culture idols but I figured it would be kind of funny if he didn't... hence this. I'm glad you appreciated it!

Thank you so much for reading and for the wonderful comment <3 I'm really glad you're enjoying it and I hope the rest won't disappoint ^^

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