In the Meantime, Part 12 (Drabble)
Pairing: college roommates!JongKey
Rating: NC-17
Genre: woot smutty birthday fluff
Summary:( Things are off to a bit of an odd start, but Jonghyun soon declares this the best birthday ever. )
Rating: NC-17
Genre: woot smutty birthday fluff
Summary:( Things are off to a bit of an odd start, but Jonghyun soon declares this the best birthday ever. )
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I read willingly because it never fails to be perfect like equal parts lovey dovey and hot as heck.
I love this au!! I'm so excited every time you update it T-T
You're the best!
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I'm glad you like this AU, it's sure fun to write. Thanks again <333
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First of all, what a birthday present. This would be one of the most memorable things in their relationship and im completely happy with knowing that they are going to grow older and when they are laying down in their bed one night after coming home from work jonghyun is going to be like "hey key remember when we spend the whole day naked with each other for my birthday. we should do that again" but key is only half listening because he's exhausted and the smell of jonghyun calms him down so he hums and jonghyun takes that as a sign on agreement. so when sunday comes around key finds all of his clothes missing. oooh i love it!
one of my favorite moments of this whole thing is "to spill moans and gasps into his ear and Jonghyun kept quiet just to hear them all. It went on forever, the good kind of forever, the one that suspended time, that gave him something to write and sing about when minutes and seconds came ( ... )
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And oh you, I swear it's worth it to write fic just for the little scenarios you come up with xD That's so sweet, and this does indeed make a great "hey remember when" story ^^
When I had the idea for this I knew I wanted them to spend a good chunk of time just kissing because come on hehe. I'm glad you liked that darling!
You just made me interested in a revenge!Minho drabble or something lol I'll have to think more about it, see if I get any ideas lol but that could be very funny indeed
Key definitely was on his top game that day ;) I just couldn't resist. But I have to correct you here: there's no such thing NO SUCH THING as too many otp feels heheheheeeee <3333
And I already told you that your before last paragraph/sentence made me laugh xD
Thank you so much darling, I'm so glad you liked it <3 thank you for the feedback, too!
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Key definitely was on his top game that day ;) he was on top a couple of times that day hehehehehe
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I'm glad you think it's natural, and they certainly do know how to enjoy each other here, lol. I know this is a bit like a parody, but I do want some realism as well so thank you for your comment <3 And I'm doubly glad you liked this one because I had my doubts about it <3
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there are some quotes i realllly want to pull out so i'll come back and do that later but since i just finished this i wanted to let you know that it has completely taken my breath away.
you're fantastic <3
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and i read this through again because ugh it's sooooo great ;~; anyway, quote time!
Jonghyun spent a few long moments reciprocating, kissing Kibum’s sleep-puffed lips awake. - perfect. key has the prettiest lips ever btw.
while his hands ran over his skin, soft and sleep-warm under his palms. - your attention to detail! perfect descriptors. all my feels.
“Begging already?” Kibum asked quietly, mouthing at his jaw. - kekeke... kekeke. sassy.
It went on forever, the good kind of forever, the one that suspended time, that gave him something to write and sing about when minutes and seconds came to matter again. - i loved this for reasons. and i also loved that there was so much explicit kissing in this (explicit like the opposite of implied not ~~explicit~~ lmao) because kissing is intimate and really super fun tbh.
“Didn’t need to,” Kibum deadpanned, although he had a sneaky look to his eyes, “you listen to me so well already ( ... )
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He does have pretty and plump lips and Jonghyun is damn lucky!
It was a bit hard to find a balance of details and ellipses that was satisfying. At first I wasn't going to be descriptive but then I was like nawww I want sexy times so I wrote some but they were a bit hard to incorporate. Anyway, I'm blabbering, the point is thank you I'm glad you like the details!
And like I told k_pop4life, I really wanted to have them just kissing for a while because like you said it's really intimate and I just wanted it hehe <3
Yes yes yesssssssss write it moreeeeeee!!!! I encourage you 100% to do so :D
I love you too <3 thank you for reading and for the awesome quote comment <3 I'm so glad you liked this darling and again I always encourage you to write because I love your stuff <333
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(bless all of those things indeed xD <3)
It's my pleasure darling, thank you for reading them, I'm really glad you like my stuff <3
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