Whenever (Part II)
Pairing: JongKey
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Coming-of-Age, AU, Sci-Fi
Beta-ed by: desiderada
Summary: Time is to Jonghyun as colours are to the blind, and Kibum finds it in himself to listen. Maybe not believe, but at least listen.
( “Can you do me a favour?” )
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Coming-of-Age, AU, Sci-Fi
Beta-ed by: desiderada
Summary: Time is to Jonghyun as colours are to the blind, and Kibum finds it in himself to listen. Maybe not believe, but at least listen.
( “Can you do me a favour?” )
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is sort of an influence for this story (love that show)
and can i just say, the way you write always pulls me in and keeps me captivated until i'm at the last word of a chapter, and i think "I want to read more". Can't wait for part 3 ^^ <3
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Thank you so much! I'm actually a bit worried about the slow pace of this fic, so that really means a lot <3 thank you <3
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also I just looked at last chapter and my REAL COMMENT ISN'T THERE OMFG IT DIDN'T SEND I AM SO UPSET
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your writing style makes me squirm. IN THE GOOD WAY, OF COURSE. it's very, very beautiful, like every word you use just rolls off the tongue perfectly with each sentence...I really don't know what I'm even trying to say. I can't explain it, but just know your writing style is perfect, don't ever change. <3
so now, I quote the entire story:
When Kibum glances back to face him, he can’t help but think the frown on Jonghyun’s face is sort-of-really-but-not-really adorable. d'awww ^^ this made me love jonghyun more, tbh XD
“Hmm,” Kibum huffs, tapping his pencil to his bottom lip in thought - when is he not thinking? - “lucky.” I really like how laid-back Kibum already is with the situation...like, it actually didn't take all that much for ( ... )
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Kibum bites back a smile and brashly pushes the other forward when he lingers in the entranceway. awkward jonghyun awggghhhhhfhkljf;fj how do I even begin to explain how much I love him in this story...<3
Kibum wonders why it’s always so hard to understand. I wonder this, too.
Kibum has to physically pull him out of his doorway a while later since he keeps bowing to his grandmother who bids them a good day and waves them off. He rolls his eyes when he stumbles down the front steps alongside him. I want to hug jonghyun. or keep him for my own. can he sit in my bedroom while I study? once again, another subtle interaction from these two that I can't help but adore.
Kibum wants to smack his own forehead when Jonghyun tries to bow, stopping him halfway ( ... )
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I wanted Jonghyun to come off as likeable despite his creepy habits, so that you like him makes me go yay \o/ !
About Kibum being laid-back:
I realize now that he's perhaps a bit too "ok" with everything Jonghyun says, but then again he's the kind of person to push stuff he doesn't want to think about to the back of his mind and not ponder it or linger on it, if that makes any sense. Also, the fact that he's been seeing Jonghyun around since he was six (at least that's the earliest he remembers xD) means he should, to some degree, be used to the boy. And he figured out a while ago that there was something unusual with him and lived with that knowledge before even talking to him, so Jonghyun being weird is not a surprise to him, in a way? OTL I hope this makes a bit of sense -- although it's not important at all, actually, so yeah. But mostly I think Kibum welcomes Jjong in his life because he's not comfortable in his own ( ... )
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I love you for saying that ;_; <3
Thank you so, so, so much ♥
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