Comments | just2wings: Whenever (Part I)

just2wings

Whenever (Part I)

Jul 13, 2012 10:21

Pairing: JongKey
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Coming-of-Age, AU, Sci-Fi
Beta-ed by: desiderada
Summary: Time is to Jonghyun as colours are to the blind. For Kibum, it’s a different story entirely.

( Past, Present, Future. Simple, you would think. )

genre: sci-fi, type: chaptered, pairing: jongkey, genre: teenage years, rating: pg-15, !fanfic

Comments 54

caitlinonkey July 13 2012, 19:50:24 UTC

ps. your writing really jus get's better and better, I hope you update this soon, I'm totally gripped.

just2wings July 13 2012, 20:08:48 UTC

asldfja;ljksd thank you so much T.T
I'm so happy you like this. Writing Jonghyun because of what you mentioned was especially fun ^^
<3<3<3

bblingasaurus July 13 2012, 22:46:14 UTC

Whoa. I didnt want this to end.

INTRIGUED.

*sits and waits for next update, forgoing food and drink and the company of people*

just2wings July 14 2012, 03:41:19 UTC

OH SO CURIOUS YEAAAAAH ♪
couldn't help it xD but I'm glad you are \o/ though you might want to eat and drink because I have no idea when the next update will be :(
Thank you so much <3

shygirl_withcas July 14 2012, 00:29:24 UTC

omg I like it I like it a lot. Even if I don't really understand what's going on but I want to know... because I don't watch Doctor Who I just know that he time travels or something lol but I reallt NEED MORE of this, is really good :)

just2wings July 14 2012, 03:44:01 UTC

This really has nothing to do with Doctor Who, though. I was just inspired to write a fic incorporating the concept of time, that's it. And yeah, you're not meant to understand everything yet since it's from Kibum's p.o.v. but more shall be said in part 2! So no worries there ^^
Thank you very much!!

shygirl_withcas July 14 2012, 04:35:23 UTC

I felt like I should put this here lol

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just2wings July 14 2012, 04:38:53 UTC

Omg Friends \o/
*huggles you*

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kiku_cha8_8 July 14 2012, 01:35:47 UTC

This was wonderful. From start to finish I was hooked because your writing is do rich and enjoyable to read, I was slightly wishing I could read slower!

I love how Jonghyun and Key's relationship is slowly unraveling. That the ever rational thinking (for now) Kibum is getting closet to the increasingly curious and bizzare Jonghyun, enough to even invite him in.

The theme of rationality vs irrationality is so gracefully handled. Really this writing is some of your best, it is fantastic. Really excited for the next part!

just2wings July 14 2012, 03:47:35 UTC

"That the ever rational thinking (for now) Kibum is getting closet to the increasingly curious and bizzare Jonghyun"
let me just hug you tight tight tight because you got the point of this whole fic sobs T.T <333333333
and
"The theme of rationality vs irrationality"
YOU NAILED THE THEME ASDLFJAS;DJF THANK YOUUUUUUU FOR CATCHING ON SO EARLY
I love you. Thank you.
*hugs you*
You made me so happy, you have no idea <333333333

kiku_cha8_8 July 14 2012, 04:31:01 UTC

CLOSET. THIS IS WHY I SHOULD NOT COMMENT VIA PHONE OTL

No I should be thanking you for writing such an amazing story :) ♥

just2wings July 14 2012, 04:35:07 UTC

It's okay I didn't even notice the typo the first time xD
but thank you for reading and commenting and being so lovely <333333333

xdenisex July 14 2012, 02:58:12 UTC

i don't even watch or really like doctor who, but this is actually really good and jonhyuns such a creep and i love it and kibum is so cute idek and i want more ;~;

just2wings July 14 2012, 03:49:31 UTC

That's okay, this has nothing to do with the series anyway, I was just playing around with the concept of time and this was born \o/
Thank you very much for reading <3 I really hope the rest will deliver!