Waiting on a Shooting Star (Oneshot)

Aug 20, 2011 16:15

Pairing: JongKey
Rating: PG
Genre: Song Fic, AU, Fluff and some Angst
Word count: ~2000
Disclaimer: Yeah... no.
Summary: They grow up together, but they only really grow up until much later.
A/N: Inspired by Train’s “Drops of Jupiter”, lyrics are in italics.
He's amongst stars, now. )

genre: angst, type: songfic, type: oneshot, rating: pg, pairing: jongkey, genre: fluff, !fanfic

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karilein August 20 2011, 21:33:07 UTC
I like the story. Kind of sad in parts, but fitting...*sighs*

And you're right, sth. about the end is a bit...weird. I read it a few times, but I can't even tell what it is D:
Maybe it's only my greed to read more xD

<3

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just2wings August 21 2011, 00:45:48 UTC
I know! Something about the ending keeps bothering me, but I just don't know what or how to fix it xD

Thank you so much for reading and commenting so kindly ^^ I'm glad you liked it ^^

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jess_mmam August 20 2011, 21:33:43 UTC
It's beautiful! The mood was well set!!
I really like it... I didn't want it to end...
I was like: "what? no more? already the end?"

Thanks for sharing!!

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just2wings August 21 2011, 00:55:06 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked ^^
I know the end is a bit random, but I was running out of inspiration xD
Thank YOU for reading&commenting!

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chibiyoko August 20 2011, 21:40:37 UTC
I love this song.
I love this fanfiction.
I love Jongkey.

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just2wings August 21 2011, 00:56:29 UTC
I love JongKey too and I love your comment. ^^
Thank you very much <3

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mikssi August 20 2011, 22:22:39 UTC
I think it's pretty safe to say that I love everything you write.

The mood and the tone and especially the beginning when you described their friendship... <3<3 Oh, and Key throughout the whole thing... stalking Jjong's performances but completely denying it... he's precious :)

(I personally don't find a problem with the ending. I think it's fittingly open, even though I'm needy and I wanted to read more either way.. XD)

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just2wings August 21 2011, 01:05:44 UTC
And I love everything that you write, so we're good ^^

I really like friendship!JongKey <3. Probably because they seemed like really good friends even before debut.
Key is always precious (...to me xD hoho my beautiful pun)

Thank you so much! I'm sort of relieved you liked the ending - thank you again for your kind words ^^

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mikssi August 21 2011, 03:45:01 UTC
sooo we should just be best friends and call it a day.

(and yes, those two were always bros.)

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just2wings August 21 2011, 03:49:21 UTC
*flails around in happiness*
I agree. :D

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just2wings August 21 2011, 01:13:22 UTC
Thank you! Your comment made me smile :) thank you for reading ^^

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