Comments | jusrecht: Drabble: Crime and Punishment (Schneizel/Suzaku)

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Drabble: Crime and Punishment (Schneizel/Suzaku)

Oct 28, 2008 21:01

Title: Crime and Punishment
Prompt: Jealousy (Code Geass, Schneizel/Suzaku)
Requester: xtainted_blackx
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Smut, and rather graphically written too…
Disclaimer: The title is Dostoyevsky’s. Forgive me for using the title of such a great, profound work for something like this.
Word Count: 1429 (I have failed)
( SMUT ALERT )

!series: infinity, pairing: schneizel/suzaku, fandom: code geass, !drabbles

Comments 38

meine_liebe October 28 2008, 15:47:06 UTC

gah~! you can always make me melt into a puddle of goodness XD didn't i tell you I /love/ your schenizel x suzaku moments? :D *hearts*

jusrecht October 28 2008, 16:00:45 UTC

Muahaha. Behold the power of this pairing! It makes people melt into puddle!

I'm glad you enjoyed ^^

clair3 October 28 2008, 16:20:44 UTC

I feel so happy after reading this XDD

jusrecht October 28 2008, 16:32:42 UTC

Yay! I think that's the point XD

xtainted_blackx October 28 2008, 17:27:33 UTC

*dies* Will revive for better commentry after brain starts working again.

.....but basically, omg OMG OMG amazing.

jusrecht October 28 2008, 17:33:37 UTC

:DDDDD

destinedcarcass October 28 2008, 21:46:30 UTC

...will come back for a more coherent comment.

OMFGROWRLOL THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!

jusrecht October 28 2008, 21:52:27 UTC

Then perhaps, mission accomplished? XDDD

destinedcarcass October 29 2008, 12:29:57 UTC

Seriously. It does. I believe so. Nimnu ryoukai, deshou ka na?

But yeah. Unfairly phenomenal, indeed.

Schneizel, you hot, cunning, royal bastard. Suzaku still loves him anyway so~~~~~this just radiates awesomeness~!! Jealous!Schneizel just PAWNS. He wins, hands down, no protest, no contest, whatsoever. The way he makes it seem like he's angry, but he's actually not, but in reality he is, just tortures dear Suzaku and it's utter <3<3<3!! And really, it's like Suzaku's the only who can mouth off to Schneizel and get away with it. Probably because they're in bed? Yeah.

Even so, your portrayal of Suzaku is just irresistably adorable and Schneizel, as I've said, PAWNS.

but LOL, Claire's a fangirl of JacquesxSuzaku, it seems. What more if she finds out about SchneizelxSuzaku? ***cackles***

The last paragraph and the last line made me smile. It's sweet and hot and so typical of them, well, Suzaku that it just wins. XDXDXD

Gambatte ne~~~waiting for more awesomest awesome work <3! **thumbs up and waves moral support SchneizelxSuzaku ( ... )

jusrecht October 29 2008, 13:11:34 UTC

Glad to hear that ;D

OH YES SCHNEIZEL SO PWNS. And I'm sure Suzaku only wants to be owned by his prince XDDD Haha, that's why I said this drabble took place in the future. There is no way current Suzaku will mouth off Schneizel like that, and their intimacy here is really something else.

Claire knows all right, but she likes to mess up with her friends 8D

I'm so happy you like the last paragraph! It made me all WAFF-y inside while writing that..

Thank you~~ (Who cares about moral when it involves this pairing? XDDD)

ikui October 29 2008, 01:38:04 UTC

Seriously? Suzaku's self-control is downright crazy. Although perhaps its because of the punishment he would receive if he didn't behave. >:D

And I totally love how Schneizel chooses the appropriate punishment for Suzaku. Possessive little Britannian Prince aren't we?

Oh and, that was hot. Very very hot. I hope you were embarassed while you were writing it. XD

(BTW omfg The Hush Sound are amazing.)

jusrecht October 29 2008, 06:12:22 UTC

Well, if Schneizel is your master, you learn to obey XD

Actually it's just an excuse for smut but I'm glad if you think it's appropriate. And it's my belief that if you have Suzaku, you will be possessive about him. It's just the law LOL

Thank you! Er, actually, not really... I was just happy imagining these two doing it *is very, very shot* XDDDD

(Yes they are! I love their songs *_*)