memory is a puddle.

Dec 19, 2010 01:50

memory is a puddle
junkwang (junhyung/kikwang), pg-13, goosebump-inducing unbeta'd
bartender!junkwang, as requested by blur2katak! merry early x'mas, kyakyakya.

memory is a puddle )

pairing: junkwang, fandom: beast, goosebump-inducing

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blur2katak December 18 2010, 18:07:42 UTC
SPOT!
will read when i get back to proper internet connection tmrw..
;A;

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blur2katak December 20 2010, 06:28:34 UTC
WHAT IS THIS?! THIS DOESN'T BREAK MY HEART OR MAKE ME CRY. >:( LOLJK ( ... )

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gauzeling December 18 2010, 18:42:21 UTC

I had to calm myself down when I see this because sdjkfhskldjfh JunKwang? From you? Best thing ever tonight!

This whole thing makes me laugh, to be honest. It kind of rushed, but in a good way. Without lingering too much on transitions but I like the way Junhyung's thoughts progress, from one thing to another.

And the concept is just. What an odd universe. And intriguing too, because a bar that makes people (literally) forget? Sounds convenient, and scary.

They're both adorable in their own ways in this fic. I love the interaction, how Gikwang remembers when Junhyung doesn't (what made him drink the amnesia shot, I'd like to know). Doojoon's cameo is all sorts of lol. It'll be really nice to see a continuation to this? ♥

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junpops December 19 2010, 06:08:54 UTC
it's my first attempt at junkwang, so... OTL i have trouble writing something longer than 2000 words, that's why it's rushed ;A;

Writing about a normal bar would just be boring, so i decided to play around with the idea of alcohol and amnesia. \o/

i'm glad you found it alright all the same because i was quite worried about it coming off as weird and uncomfortable to read. your words mean alot to me ♥

thanks for reading and commenting, and i'll try! ♥

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gauzeling December 19 2010, 15:45:18 UTC

I completely adore JunKwang. They have the cutest dynamic ever. :) And I have the same problem when writing; I can't write long things at all. I tend to lose grasp of what's going on lol.

I hope to see more from you. ♥ Thanks for this!

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blur2katak December 20 2010, 06:30:58 UTC
i bullied her to write it
i requested her to write it.
our ~secret~ otp. tehehe :')

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sarangx33 December 18 2010, 19:30:02 UTC
What a very interesting plot this has! It was a great read; I really enjoyed it. :)

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junpops December 19 2010, 06:09:53 UTC
aw i'm so glad you enjoyed it! ;A;
i was afraid people might feel that it's an awkward read...
so thank you for telling me you liked it! ♥

thanks for reading and commenting ♥

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cindyxmc December 18 2010, 20:22:55 UTC
please please write a sequel to this!
you left me hanging with the polaroid falling out of kwangie's pocket.
lol and i'm just hoping junhyung would find it and pick it up.
and the polaroid is old right? during their first time ? lol
curious curious~

love it so much<3

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junpops December 19 2010, 06:11:06 UTC
i'm a sucker for cliffhangers, hehe.
maybe he'll find it someday? and yup, it's an old polaroid of them when they were together :)

thanks for reading and commenting ♥

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cindyxmc December 19 2010, 09:31:42 UTC
you're horrible! LOL in a very good way.
i guess i'll let my imagination run wild on this one. haha

hope you write more of this pairing, keke.
& you're welcome!
thanks for writing it. ^^

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junpops December 19 2010, 06:11:50 UTC
i'm glad you found it an interesting read! :))
they're starting to grow on me. ♥

thanks for reading and commenting ♥

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