Hogsmeade Entries....

Aug 15, 2006 12:37

Here's my Hogsmeade Entries, let me know what you think. In fact, please critique them....I need advice on how to improve. Especially the fic!

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unavoidedcrisis August 15 2006, 23:49:20 UTC
I'm not very good at being helpful, but here are my thoughts.

The first friends only banner- Hermione- the script at the bottom is very lovely, but I find it spaces weird.

Red dot icon is brilliant. Very creative, I thought.

'Neither can live...' icon is good, but I think it's a little too... sharp? Is that a good word? Maybe Voldemort should be more hazy. I think the transition from Harry to Voldemort to blue background is too sudden.

The fic. Oh wow. I laughed my ass off and I haven't even seen the Cars movie. I like the way you made sure to tell us what everyone looks like in car form. Hagrid = Hummer. Very good.

It's interesting that even though it's like 'Bwaaa, we're all cars!', they can all stop for a second and laugh their butts [fenders?] off at the misfortune of Malfoy. How very canon of you.

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ldydragon7 August 16 2006, 13:02:13 UTC
I agree, a different more hazy/creepy pic of Voldemort would work better I think. But very good over all.

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