I'm not very good at being helpful, but here are my thoughts.
The first friends only banner- Hermione- the script at the bottom is very lovely, but I find it spaces weird.
Red dot icon is brilliant. Very creative, I thought.
'Neither can live...' icon is good, but I think it's a little too... sharp? Is that a good word? Maybe Voldemort should be more hazy. I think the transition from Harry to Voldemort to blue background is too sudden.
The fic. Oh wow. I laughed my ass off and I haven't even seen the Cars movie. I like the way you made sure to tell us what everyone looks like in car form. Hagrid = Hummer. Very good.
It's interesting that even though it's like 'Bwaaa, we're all cars!', they can all stop for a second and laugh their butts [fenders?] off at the misfortune of Malfoy. How very canon of you.
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The first friends only banner- Hermione- the script at the bottom is very lovely, but I find it spaces weird.
Red dot icon is brilliant. Very creative, I thought.
'Neither can live...' icon is good, but I think it's a little too... sharp? Is that a good word? Maybe Voldemort should be more hazy. I think the transition from Harry to Voldemort to blue background is too sudden.
The fic. Oh wow. I laughed my ass off and I haven't even seen the Cars movie. I like the way you made sure to tell us what everyone looks like in car form. Hagrid = Hummer. Very good.
It's interesting that even though it's like 'Bwaaa, we're all cars!', they can all stop for a second and laugh their butts [fenders?] off at the misfortune of Malfoy. How very canon of you.
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