Drabble+: "Birthday Punches"

Aug 03, 2010 00:01

Hi, everyone!

Recently I've taken to writing drabbles, or brief little stories about one particular scenario in the lives of some of my Alphabetacy characters. I started one about Isla's glasses which didn't work out, and two about Arthur will become scenes in Chapter 44; basically, I haven't had much chance to share these stories. But I finally ( Read more... )

drabble, generation i, twinz r 2 cute, family, real life, birthday, inspired by real life!, inigo & imago, knox, isla

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julessims August 3 2010, 14:50:47 UTC
Aww! This is so cute and so well written! I could see everything so clearly in my head while reading it. The image of Inny and Immy squeezed into the chair is a very precious one. And the birthday pinches, LOL.

It's sad to think that the woman Inny saw in his dream is Immy in the future. It's heartbreaking, because they're so close in this and it shows so well.

I really miss Immy, and I miss the closeness that she and Inny had.

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junebug_13 August 4 2010, 01:53:44 UTC
Thanks, Jules! It went through a lot of editing when I copied it from my notebook into Word; I gave it a bit more substance and elaborated and reworded things. That image of the twins speaks volumes and just fits them so well. I only found out about birthday pinches at that party, LOL. I was well-accustomed to punches like Faith, though.
I miss their dynamic very much. They were so well-suited for each other, really, but life just got in the way. :(
~June

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maenad36 August 3 2010, 22:41:11 UTC
Cuuute! *misses Immy*

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junebug_13 August 4 2010, 01:54:37 UTC
Thanks, Mae! And yeah, I miss her and them and what they had. :'(
~June

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