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Growing - First Impressions

Nov 02, 2007 00:48

Title: Growing - First Impressions
Author: junas_stories
Pairing: later on Cristiano Ronaldo/Ruud Van Nistelrooy
Rating: PG
Word Count: 683
Disclaimer: Don't know anybody or anything and am not making any money. Sadly.
Summary: Cristiano comes to United. (First line alludes to the practise in the United squad to tackle any newbie three-times so he knows who's ( Read more... )

rating: pg, fandom: footie rps, character: ruud van nistelrooy, challenge: elevensies, character: cristiano ronaldo

Comments 10

choccies November 2 2007, 01:02:59 UTC

I loved this. I really love fics where the author points out that the person on the feild isn't like the person in real life. And Cristiano was so cute, and awkward, and aww... I just loved how you captured him and RVN so well.

You rock my socks like a fox in a box!

junas_stories November 2 2007, 01:11:19 UTC

Oooh, thank you. Glad you liked. *twirls happily*

shandoraz November 2 2007, 06:16:04 UTC

This is part one of something like a series.
OOOH YEAH :DD Since my immediate thought after reading --> 'More.'

Your writing is so clear and beautiful and I love. Cris just melts my heart. Now where's the rest? *g*

junas_stories November 2 2007, 12:31:44 UTC

Oooh, thank you for the lovely words. :D

Now where's the rest? *g*
Hey! Don't get impatient. Actually, do. Heh. The good news is that the whole thing is pretty much out-lined. Now I only need to find the motivation and the discipline to sit myself down and write.

shandoraz November 2 2007, 14:19:49 UTC

You're very much welcome.

Did I really type that? xD Because I wouldn't like it myself if people bugged me about a series, at least if I have nothing more done (but you do, and *wills you to find motivation and discipline*) and I try to make a point of not doing it myself but... I was excited ^__^ Am.

junas_stories November 2 2007, 16:31:17 UTC

Oh, don't worry. I got you. And I don't really mind people bugging me. I'm not easily offended and/or pressured. Heh. But with this one, pressuring myself was actually the point. Because if I start something I will finish it, too. And now that the first part is posted. Heh.

kunargie09 November 3 2007, 13:50:00 UTC

Yaaayyy
You wrote little!Cristiano !!

junas_stories November 3 2007, 15:06:19 UTC

I guess, I did. Heh.

rafey November 16 2007, 05:08:13 UTC

well .. quit intrusting .. i dont know how i missed it when it was posted first ..

junas_stories November 16 2007, 11:00:48 UTC

Thank you. It was probably buried somewhere on page 4 of the backlog of your flist. Heh.