Maybe we're torn apart

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Title: Collision Course (9/13)
Pairing: Steven Gerrard/Xabi Alonso, Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres, Xabi Alonso/Harry Kewell, Steve Finnan/Daniel Agger
Characters: The entire Liverpool squad.
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: None of this is real. I don’t own the boys.
A/N: University AU | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Part 6 | Part 7 | Part 8

Comments

[candycane7]

NNNNNNGGGGHHH...

♥

(Yeah, I've got no words right now.)

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Wow, and your username has "candycane" on it. Awesome. XP

[ladykillertofu]

Oh. My. God. I'm a psychic, I swear. I was thinking about you updating this today :D (while I was still able to think. which was before euro started. and before alex frei got injured. when the world was still bright. D:)
Anyhow, I just went 'OMGYAY :D'. Your fic makes me ridiculously happy, I hope you know that.

AND YOU MADE FINNS LESS DESPICABLE (impartially speaking, that is. because i obviously also loved him when he was an ass and ruined all the beauty of togger) - HOORAY.
I adore the Finns/Danny friendship so it's all good now (except for all the other drama and heartbreak. scroll down to read my 38497882 page-essay on those.)

Finns stood up and dusted himself off, “We’re late to class, Agger.”
“But Finns! It was the perfect comeback!” Dan tried to explain, skipping after him.XDDD I love that part. so. much ♥♥♥ I want to marry it and have its babies so that there are a whole bunch of those parts

[ladykillertofu]

And you'd think if you write a comment like that, you get it all covered up. But I clearly fail at life (and writing sensible, intelligible comments).

I love the way you let Stevie find out.
Definitely the most original thing you could have come up with.
(apart from xabi telling him he's quitting the team because he's off to vegas to marry harry and then live together in australia on their own kangaroo farm).

Well, yes, that shall be all.

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You know, I really considered having Harry and Xabi have sex and then Stevie unintentionally walking into the dorm room because he was looking for Fernando. But that was just so soap-opera-ish, and I've already used my unitentionally-catch-teh-cheating with Dan/Finns/Fernando. So.

But, I really do like your kangaroo farm suggestion. I can't believe I didn't think of that. And Xabi and Harry would marry in the White Chapel in Vegas, where Britney married before, so we know their marriage would last *forever*.

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Hey! Why is everyone saying that I made Finns such an ass?? I really didn't mean to! D: D: D: It's not my fault the Finns in my head sortakindalikea had separation anxiety over Danny and just had to ruin the Togger goodness of the world. D: *grabs Chapter 8 and holds it protectively against chest*

But yes. Haha, I love it that Finns and Dan are back as friends. And I think he's one of my favourite characters too, even if this is really one of the first times I've written him. 0.0 But of course, Yossi > Pepe > Crouch > Carra > Finns in my fic-writing world, mmkay?

Oh, don't worry, you know I love Danny too much to let him go and be lonely and just be the stalker-perv he is in this chapter. XP

You're so mean! *loves Stevie and Fernando* I love brotherly!Stevie and 0.0!Fernando. D:

ILY2. :D

[ninefifteen]

You updated!!! Me = a very happy girl!

Loved it and I just love where this is going! I am totally pro-Stevie/Fernando ♥ Can't wait for next chapter ;)

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YAY, ONE MORE FOR THE S/F CAMP. We have to find strength in numbers because the haterz are many! D:

[ninefifteen]

I know :( I don't get the hate. And seriously, now they've both been cheated on, they should be allowed to seek some comfort.

Seriously, ignore the Stevie/Fernando haters. This is YOUR fic ♥

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Trufax!

reima has been demanding S/F for so long, she promises to protect me from the hating mob. XP

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*pats Stevie/Fernando* There's so much hating on my boys, even if I just made them all brotherly and comforting and candycane-chomping friends! D:

Haha, I was kind of snickering to myself when I was typing the whole detention scene too. Seriously, I can just predict rereading this chapter and just slapping my forehead and going, "WTF, Mika."

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OHAI, don't read my AU, update yours because I miss it everyday like whoa. D:

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But yeah, I do love your description and interpretation of Stevie and Fernando being the eye of the storm. I wish I meant it to be that profound. XP