NCIS Fic - Collision Course - Chapter 12 (PG-13, Gen)

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Comments

[crazedcrusader]

I just read this whole thing in one sitting. I'm really, really liking it - you have the voices down really well, and I love the little details like Abby teaching Palmer to shoot, Palmer yelling at the TV when the medicine is wrong...minutiae like that can really make a story, and you do a very good job.

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Thank you very much for your kind words! It's really gratifying to hear I've kept the team in character (characterization is something I tend to focus on when writing fics). I'm glad you're enjoying it so far; especially the little details. I love including them for the quirks it gives each character and each story, and I'm glad you're enjoying them as well!

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You might consider going to sleep first (6 straight hours of class), and reading it later? :P

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*g*
I liked Jimmy's hero!moment (much as I love the team, Palmer slipped in while I was writing and stole the show).

[ladyniko]

**screams in agony**

Aaaaaargh! Killer cliff hanger ending!!!

You're trying to kill me, aren't you? :-p

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*evil grin*

The next chapter should be up shortly! =)

[chloebroefan]

Uhm...my clock doesn't have shortly...checks again...nope, no shortly. About how long is that, because I'm DYING here! Excellent chapter!

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I'm hoping to post the next chapter on Thursday. Glad you're enjoying it so far! =)

[serendipity_15]

Okay wow, I really wished that you hadn't stopped there because I want to know what happens next.

I like the Abby/Palmer interaction, on the show it makes sense that the main focus would be on the team in the bullpen so it makes sense that Abby, Ducky and Jimmy would interact more with each other than with the team members. It's nice to see that there's more to Jimmy than that nervous young man we usually see, I especially liked him in tonight's episode.

[jumpfall]

I loved Jimmy in 'Broken Bird!' I wish we got to see more of him (and of Abby/Ducky/Jimmy interaction) on the show.

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. The next one should be up soon. =)

[serendipity_15]

Oh yes, there should definitely be more Abby/Ducky/Jimmy interaction. I loved Jimmy in 'Broken Bird' as well and I really wish that he was a cast regular instead of a recurring character, he's been on the show longer than Kate or Jenny, he deserves to be a regular too.

[jumpfall]

I would love for Jimmy to become a cast regular (he's certainly been on the show long enough!) =)

Barring that, I would also like to see another Jimmy-centric episode like 'About Face'.