Hikago: Entrances, I, II & III

Apr 17, 2005 22:53


The weekend must be making me insane. Accompanying drabbles to The Crying Game and Shock.

Title: Entrances, I, II & III
Author: Luce Red
Series: Hikaru no Go
Word count: 100 each
Rating: General
Challenge: None
Notes: Thanks to all those who commented on The Crying Game and Shock, especially svz_insanity. This is somewhat related.
what happened in the loo, part 1 )

challenge: none, series: hikaru no go

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svz_insanity April 17 2005, 15:30:27 UTC
*dies laughing*

My dad's going to yell at me to get in the car (going to NYC) so I can't ramble on and on as I usually do. ^^; This is hilarious. I love it so much. *wipes tears from eyes* Poor Touya... I love the Drat that Shindou, he thought, he affects me even when I defeat him. It's hard to believe they're thirty-five...

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issen4 April 18 2005, 00:44:13 UTC
Thought you might like it! Now you know what happened when Touya was freaking out in the toilet... and how Waya found out. ^^

Hope your trip to NYC went fine!

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svz_insanity April 18 2005, 14:57:33 UTC
My trip went great ^^ Oh, and in response to your reply to flonnebonne... Poor Waya... he's probably wondering "Am I the only sane Go player in Tokyo?" Or at least, the only pro Go player who actually uses the bathroom for the original intent.

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d_grayman April 17 2005, 19:58:01 UTC
Waaaai~! These are soo good! Soooo funny! The second part was definitely the funniest, though. "You! You are the one who made him cry!" Haha...

Thank you, thank you, thank you for contributing so much to this community! And with these excellent-quality drabbles, no less!

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issen4 April 18 2005, 00:46:48 UTC
Thanks for your comments. I'm actually a bit surprised at how much I'm enjoying writing these drabbles. Glad you liked them!

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ramble_corner April 18 2005, 05:41:18 UTC
You continued it!!!!

*hearts floating around ......
i literally snorted (not very elegant but true) when i read it ..... and considering by now i know to expect all these little quirks from all of your characters ... meh...

*still holding her stomach as TRYING to stop laughing

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issen4 April 18 2005, 06:57:19 UTC
Glad you liked it! Ochi, as we know, does what he usually does when he loses, and Waya is rude and impulsive, especially towards Touya... What a busy place the loo is!

Let's hope this wasn't the only bathroom at the tournament venue.

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ramble_corner April 18 2005, 07:08:29 UTC
Let's hope this wasn't the only bathroom at the tournament venue.
*falls of chair

true true .. all the other go-players would surely be in a fine fettle if it was so

and that is while not adding kuwabara-sensei in the mix

kuwabara sensei walking by as hikaru met touya (hikaru's eyes still teary).

wonder what would HIS remark be ....

XD XD

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flonnebonne April 18 2005, 06:21:04 UTC
Hurrah! I liked the Ochi one the best, because Ochi's special relationships with bathrooms always amuses me.

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issen4 April 18 2005, 06:54:36 UTC
Ochi's special relationships with bathrooms always amuses me.

You and me both!

Just think... if Hikaru is 35 years old, Ochi's probably 32 or 33... and he still locks himself in the bathroom when he loses!

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silvermuse89 April 19 2005, 02:20:46 UTC
I just got back from Boston and it was a very nice treat to see these drabbles. I thought you weren't going to write a sequel ^_^ but I'm glad you did. I liked the last one the best, since the last line seemed to fit in perfectly with Akira's character and it was a wonderful ending. The first one was great because you wrote Ochi was in it. I didn't like the second one as much, maybe because it felt like a filler in between the first and last drabble. Still, great job and I can't wait to read more HnG fic from you.

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issen4 April 19 2005, 03:37:42 UTC
Good to hear from you!

Yeah, I thought I wasn't going to write a sequel either. ^^ But the scenes just leapt into my mind after (believe it or not) I flipped through a couple of paperback romances. I'm glad you liked the last; it's my favorite one of the three, too.

The next challenge is: Bathroom. Why not write a drabble yourself?

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