Shotgun 6/7: Friday Night

Dec 27, 2008 00:09

Title: Shotgun (6/7)
Author: July
Rating: R
Genre: Gen, Pre-series, crossover with Friday Night Lights
Spoilers: 4.03 for Supernatural, FNL spoilers through the Pilot
Warnings: Violence and teenage boys.
Disclaimer: I asked Santa. The jolly bastard said no. Beware of canon dialog!
Notes: Sweet Charity fic for the lovely saberivojo. Beta’d by maychorian and kimmer1227. Now ( Read more... )

dean, shotgun, au, spn fic, pre-series, bobby, sam, fnl fic, john

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ratcreature December 27 2008, 06:32:57 UTC
Wow. I wonder how they're going to explain that one.

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july_july_july December 28 2008, 06:11:39 UTC
Well, I can tell you that the truth will only be marginally involved.

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chemm80 December 27 2008, 06:39:22 UTC
Yay, yay, so very fucking much yay! Love Dean quarterbacking like a military commander taking matters into his own hands like that. Makes me all tingly! OMFG, Dean!

And then...OMG, then, he kills the demon anyway, even though he's all busted up and in pain and oh, yeah...*flails, dies*

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july_july_july December 28 2008, 06:12:23 UTC
Woohoo! I'm glad you like QB1 Dean. I know I do. *blushes*

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catsbycat December 27 2008, 07:41:24 UTC
Oh my greatness! That was so exciting. And halfway through the damn game my sister calls me to help her turn the mattress on her bed!! Ack. But anyhoo, loved the whole bit with the game - you managed to put into words what is so exciting watching the show. Even if I barely understand a word of it! Lol. Just imagining Dean being so commanding and determined... *g*

And now he's killed the demon. Yay! But it was in Coach Lamar. Shit! How the hell are they going to explain that. It's not like they can take Dean and run, not in the state he's in. But John's there, and Bobby's there and I'm sure they'll figure something out. Right?

Loved how when Dean was freaking out it was Sam that calmed him down. And when he was injured it was Sam he wanted next to him. *hugs boys*

And Timmy! \o/

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july_july_july December 28 2008, 06:15:46 UTC
I'm glad you liked this chapter! It was the most difficult to write, I think. There were quite a few plotholes by the time it made it to the betas. It makes me really happy to know that it makes some sort of sense now.

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july_july_july December 28 2008, 06:18:03 UTC
I love it when people do victory arms! Makes me grin like an idiot. I know I killed off the YED awful quickly, but...I really wanted to write something happy. I wanted to write something that wasn't too shiny or happy, but where the boys get to win. Just this once.

And, yeah, TIM!

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nightowlv December 27 2008, 09:34:40 UTC
I was so tense reading this, just waiting for the yellow eyes and the Heartbreaker. And then the Horse Collar Tackle and the broken leg came along and left me feeling slightly ill. But I was definitely feeling better at the end.

I was all "Yay Dean!" because, even injured and in pain, he was able to get his hands on the Colt and kill the demon. I almost cheered out loud (and only stopped myself because I didn't want to wake anybody else up).

And then there was this: “That was for Mom, you son of a bitch.” I love that, in this AU, John was there with the boys when the YED was finally killed. *\o/*

Fantastic job fitting the demon, the Colt, and the Winchesters finally avenging their mother into the FNL setting. I wasn't sure how it would all play out, but I love what you came up with. And I'm definitely curious to find out what the aftermath of this mess is.

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nightowlv December 27 2008, 09:50:01 UTC
And by "with the boys" I mean alive and able to celebrate with them afterwards. I know John was there in AHBLII, but, to me, this version of him witnessing the demon's death is just different. He sees Dean shoot the demon and can actually be a part of the Winchesters' YED-free future.

Yeah. Now I'm done. I definitely need to go to bed now.

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july_july_july December 28 2008, 06:20:10 UTC
Yay! I'm really glad you enjoyed this chapter. I know it was different from what I usually write, but it was fun for me. I wanted John and the boys to put up a W, you know? *sigh* I hope the final chapter meets expectations.

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