A recent SJ fic - "Lip Balm"

Feb 07, 2010 01:09

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Lip Balm

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She walked into the drug store, smiling, giddy like a child at Christmas. God, could she be more juvenile? When had this become an event worthy of her biggest, goofiest grin?

Well, she could remember when, and she certainly remembered why. And it was definitely something she was *never* going to tell anyone.

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fanfic, sam/jack, stargate sg-1

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jenniferjf February 7 2010, 13:12:48 UTC
Aw... that was sweet and clever. Thanks for sharing! It's funny, too, cause when I was in the Army I always carried lipstick in my pocket 'cause you're right :)

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julimond1402 February 7 2010, 18:39:26 UTC
Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it! And how cool that I was actually right about the lipstick thing in the army. Was just an idea, but I'm excited that you gals actually do/did it!!

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not_a_zatarc February 7 2010, 14:37:21 UTC
Very cute! hehe. XD

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julimond1402 February 7 2010, 18:39:46 UTC
Thanks a bunch!!

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julimond1402 February 7 2010, 18:43:09 UTC
I love the premise, it's very originial and cute

Aw, thanks!! I try to come up with different stuff to make it more original. I'm glad I succeeded!

and I think you did a pretty decent job of writing from Sam's POV

yeah, well, thanks. I'm getting better at writing her. Jack is much easier to write for me cause I think like him ;)

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thothmes February 7 2010, 18:44:06 UTC
Awww! I do so like me a bit of fluff. Very cute, Jack's tactic at the door, and so very off-beatily Jack.

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julimond1402 February 7 2010, 18:46:42 UTC
Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it!

"Jack's tactic at the door, and so very off-beatily Jack"

Yeah, right? I thought so too ;)

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fireheart93 February 7 2010, 22:14:36 UTC
As a lip balm freak myself this made me giggle. I am addicted to the stuff, especially the fruity ones, so I can understand why Sam would enjoy them :D Well done!

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julimond1402 February 7 2010, 22:29:59 UTC
LOL! Thanks! Evidently, I'm obsessed with them too, that's why I wrote it. I'm glad I'm not the only one ;). And I can definitely see Sam agreeing with us :)

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