Wordy? But...but what's wrong with wordy? I like wordy and plotty and pose-y if it's done well. And boy howdy am I in trouble if being wordy is like some cardinal simming no-no!
I LOL'd at the satellite conveniently falling on an inconvenient character. Did her character arc take an unexpected turn (acr shenanigans?) or were you just bored with her?
Guess Lillian's going to need the rest of that elixir after all ;)
Wordy is good in my opinion :) juliettelacoeurSeptember 17 2013, 22:48:03 UTC
I like my wordiness, but I think some readers may find it daunting.
I was extremely happy when the satellite fell on Linda. I was the one who made her stargaze . . .for hours. *whistles innocent* It was a very convenient satellite, in my opinion.
Actually, Lillian doesn't get exilir this time. Buuuut she still has quite a while left with Demi <3
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And boy howdy am I in trouble if being wordy is like some cardinal simming no-no!
I LOL'd at the satellite conveniently falling on an inconvenient character. Did her character arc take an unexpected turn (acr shenanigans?) or were you just bored with her?
Guess Lillian's going to need the rest of that elixir after all ;)
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I was extremely happy when the satellite fell on Linda. I was the one who made her stargaze . . .for hours. *whistles innocent*
It was a very convenient satellite, in my opinion.
Actually, Lillian doesn't get exilir this time. Buuuut she still has quite a while left with Demi <3
Thanks for the comment :) It means a lot.
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