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The Consequence of Showing Off - R, Sam/Dean

Jan 16, 2008 15:31

Title: The Consequence of Showing Off
Author: thelonejuliet
Characters: Sam, Dean, Dean's ego and a bike
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Word Count: 1,972
Rating: R, to be safe
Warnings: Incest, handjobs, boy kissing
Spoilers: To be safe: anything aired in the U.S.
Disclaimer: These boys aren't mine, and neither are the bicycles.
Author's Note(s): Written for layne67, who wanted a ( Read more... )

sam, fanfic, for layne67, humor, spn, wincest, angst, sam pov, prompt, dean

Comments 42

overstreets January 16 2008, 21:03:38 UTC

Aww, so sweet. I loved that last line from Sam. Just gorgeous.

thelonejuliet January 24 2008, 02:46:39 UTC

Thanks!! ^_^ I'm glad you liked it - thanks for reading!

layne67 January 17 2008, 04:33:37 UTC

Yay, you posted!!!!

I love this. It began as cute and adorable ( the boys on bikes omg ) and it ended with such hotness and LOVE!

Sam scooted in closer, tangling his limbs with Dean’s. “This is my normal now,” he whispered.

He knew Dean didn’t hear it; Dean was already fast asleep. With a quick kiss placed on Dean’s forehead and the knowledge that, now, he could do that any time he wanted, Sam quickly followed.

That is so, so beautiful. Thank you, darling. This so made my day! ♥

thelonejuliet January 24 2008, 02:47:53 UTC

Dean on a bike is the funniest thing possible - I think Kripke should write it in. *nods*

I'm glad you liked it! And, yay! I made your day!! Go me!

Sorry it took so long... *ducks head in shame*

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thelonejuliet January 24 2008, 02:48:21 UTC

*pokes*

Thanks for reading, at least. :)

miri_cris January 17 2008, 20:08:04 UTC

“Nothing,” Dean whispered after a minute, running his fingertips along Sam’s jaw. “Nothing’s funny. It’s just…all this time…”

I can almost see his face and feel what he feels at the moment *sighs*
The last scene is wonderful and touching.
God, I love that kind of ending, hopeful and sweet.

Amazing babe, as always.
Kisses *hugs*

thelonejuliet January 24 2008, 02:51:00 UTC

I know! I think my heart might've stopped as I wrote that, lol. I definitely felt it. *melts*

I'm so happy you like it! Have I mentioned before that your comments make my fics complete? Because they do, they really do. *hugs*

Thanks, sweetie!

Btw, I love that icon. It looks like my cats!! (One's a gray tabby and the other's an orange/yellow tabby.)

trueshellz January 17 2008, 23:52:50 UTC

i really liked this one
and your icon was awesome imagery
and the last line from sam was so cuuuuuuuute!
x

thelonejuliet January 24 2008, 02:51:44 UTC

Hehe, thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked it!

I love seeing your comments. *hugs*