FIC: Trust No One 1/1 *TORCHWOOD*

[juliet316]

TITLE: Trust No One 1/1 (Jack Harkness)
AUTHOR: juliet316
FANDOM: Torchwood
RATING: PG - 13
WORD COUNT: 359 Words
CONTENT: ANGST, DARK JACK, CRYOGENICS
CATEGORY: ADULT, DRAMA, VIGNETTE,
SPOILERS: Towards the end of End of Days then goes AU from there..
SUMMARY: Jack's trust was betrayed one time too many My last fic for whoverse_las (I got voted out). The prompt was

Comments

[trinityday]

Sorry you got voted off. I personally find the idea that Jack would break like this very intriguing. The ending, particularly--I keep on thinking of how different the Master arch would have been at the end of season three with this man that had formerly been known as Jack Harkness.

Plus, the line "...Owen was just enough of a bastard to where he would probably be resistant to it as well" made me laugh.

[juliet316]

It may well have been a much different arch that's for sure.

I'm glad that line made you laugh.

Thanks for reading. :-)

[owensheart]

What an interesting Alternate ending to Series 1.

Wonderfully written.

[juliet316]

Thank you and thanks for reading.

[takisys]

harsh, but right could have been. Got me the shiver, done my spine.

[juliet316]

I'm glad it could give you a shiver. Thanks for reading.

[juliet316]

I will admit that if Jack had actually done this at the end of End of Days, I would not have blamed him.

[musicaluvr]

Chilling alternate take for end of Series 1.

Interesting look at how a broken Jack may have re-acted to being betrayed one time too many.

Thanks for sharing <3

[juliet316]

Chilling was what I was going for with this. and yes, it is interesting to see how Jack might react to one betrayal too many.

Thanks for reading.