Comments | julefontane: Fic: Compensation, House/Wilson, NC-17, drabble, post epi 7x23

julefontane

Fic: Compensation, House/Wilson, NC-17, drabble, post epi 7x23

Jun 20, 2011 23:19

Compensation

It is hot, and everything feels thick with heat and sticky with sweat. The sheet is twisted underneath him and its folds will leave a crisscross of marks on his bare back and buttocks. Tiny grains of fine sand from the endless, white beach outside rub the skin on your knees. Harsh breathing fills the air, harmonizing with the soft ( Read more... )

fic: "compensation", house/wilson, drabble, nc-17

Comments 25

damigella_314 June 20 2011, 21:35:17 UTC

This was HOT. I'm so happy for every single one of this 135 words.
And yes, Wilson's shoulders are creamy white. I'm sure he would get sunburned much faster than House.

Thanks for staying up in the night to post this - everything you write is so hot I hope you'll post this on house_wilson so that those poor ladies freezing down under will have something to warm up their hearts besides the morning coffee/tea.

Great to have you back to writing.

julefontane June 21 2011, 09:04:09 UTC

Aw, thank you! I'm so glad you like this so much!
I liked the image of a creamy white Wilson and a tanned House together...
I'll post to house_wilson in a bit :)

damigella_314 June 21 2011, 09:24:03 UTC

a creamy white Wilson and a tanned House
swoon.
[I sometimes think a similar chromatic arrangement is part of what keeps my marriage solid :)./tmi]

julefontane June 21 2011, 09:35:15 UTC

LOL that's right! It goes very well together and is very durable!

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julefontane June 21 2011, 09:04:55 UTC

Thank you so much :)

alternatealto June 21 2011, 02:59:51 UTC

Oh, it's nice to see you writing H/W again -- and especially this kind of H/W!

The smell of sea and sex is intoxicating. I love the sensuality of that description. In fact, I love all of this!

julefontane June 21 2011, 09:10:11 UTC

Thanks so much! There are still so many H/W stories stuck in my head! And especially ones that take place on a beach! :)

damigella_314 June 21 2011, 09:22:08 UTC

hands over lube... to get ideas unstuck and flowing, of course ;-).

julefontane June 21 2011, 09:39:31 UTC

Mille grazie! Now it should be easier and hurt less! :D

flywoman June 21 2011, 10:56:03 UTC

Sigh... the problem with a really good drabble is that it leaves me wishing so much for more...

julefontane June 21 2011, 11:29:18 UTC

:) Thank you! Maybe I'll expand that drabble some more!

cuddyclothes June 21 2011, 11:39:20 UTC

Wonderful drabble, so evocative. I'm also grateful you've started writing again.

julefontane June 21 2011, 12:55:41 UTC

Thank you so much! Will do my best to keep up with it! :)