Criminal Minds Fic: New Miserable Experience

Oct 06, 2010 18:01

Title: New Miserable Experience
Author: jujuberry136 
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Gen (background Reid/OFC, JJ/Will)
Word Count: 1463
Warnings: Discussion of infertility
Summary: Emily had thought she was prepared, rationally she’d known this moment was coming for months, but it was like being hit by a two-by-four when she’d been expecting a paper-cut. Sequel to Hey Read more... )

jealouseyverse, fic:criminalminds, fic

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darkhawkhealer October 6 2010, 22:16:17 UTC
Just read both stories back to back.

My heart hurts, in all the very best ways.

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jujuberry136 October 6 2010, 22:18:21 UTC
Man you are fast.

Thanks for reading. I did put Emily through the ringer in these, didn't I? Poor lady.

Glad you enjoyed.

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evolutionsgirl October 6 2010, 23:13:25 UTC
I really enjoyed this one. You're great with emotion and just pulling the reader into the character's feelings.

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jujuberry136 October 6 2010, 23:20:55 UTC
Aw, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

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amichevole October 6 2010, 23:21:52 UTC
I feel like I've been punched in the chest. In the best kind of way. Loving this 'verse, even if it is ridiculously heartbreaking. Hope to see more soon. Keep up the awesome.

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jujuberry136 October 7 2010, 00:07:36 UTC
*hands you ice for the pain*

I'm glad you enjoyed the story! Thanks so much for reading.

I do hope to add at least one more story to this 'verse. As I told my beta when she told me I was too mean to Emily in this 'verse, I think of this is Emily at her lowest.

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amichevole October 7 2010, 00:12:07 UTC
Yeah, I can definitely see this as Emily at her lowest. She needs something happy, damnit. Or at least to hit rock bottom so she can climb her way back up. Looking forward to the next part. See what bribes I have to make it go faster.

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jujuberry136 October 7 2010, 00:15:17 UTC
Looks forward to seeing bribes...

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innerslytherin October 6 2010, 23:53:29 UTC
Ouch. Damn, woman, you know how to hit below the belt, don't you? But it's a good kind of hurt. This is gorgeous and sad and achy.

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darkhawkhealer October 6 2010, 23:58:51 UTC
Totally appropriate icon, though! *g*

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innerslytherin October 7 2010, 00:15:50 UTC
I couldn't resist.

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jujuberry136 October 7 2010, 00:08:25 UTC
Aw, thanks so much! Totally appropriate icon btw (I was pissed I didn't have a Prentiss icon for the occasion, glad you stepped up!).

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daylyn October 7 2010, 06:51:23 UTC
Heartwrenching and gorgeous. Poor Emily. Her pain here is palpable.

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jujuberry136 October 7 2010, 10:30:16 UTC
I really put her through the ringer in this one... poor woman.

Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed.

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