Leave a comment

Comments 111

amichevole January 29 2010, 13:32:18 UTC
!!!

!!!

!!!

I love you so much right now.

Fantastic stuff.

Seriously.

I totally loved the first one, but this is so much better, especially considering that I have actually seen all of Supernatural now. Love the Prentiss & Dean scenes, and your Castiel is simply wonderful.

!!!

Thank-you!

Reply

jujuberry136 January 30 2010, 00:56:22 UTC
Yay! I'm glad you liked it (and I want to say, wow on the speedy comment time. I am impressed).

I totally loved the first one, but this is so much better

You have no idea how happy it makes me to hear that. Seriously, I was so worried about living up to the first one the entire time I was writing this. And my beta was awesome and trying to reassure me, but since I've known her since forever I was afraid she was just saying it.

So, yay for improvement :)

Dean and Prentiss are just so much fun to write. And Castiel is a hoot.

THANK YOU for all your encouragement the past month. It definitely gave me incentive to stick to my "late-January" promise (*just* barely made it!).

Thanks for the lovely review!

Reply

amichevole January 30 2010, 02:34:48 UTC
Heh - I was just about to go to bed when I checked your page on a whim, and I ended up staying up a lot longer than I had intended. A few things that I forgot to mention the first time through:

Twilight digs = awesome.

Bobby and Rossi = holy shit these two would make a good smack-down team.

Reid having read the Supernatural books = Squee-worthy.

The hints of an epic Reid&Prentiss nerdy friendship = so very cool.

And Castiel. Because it's really worth saying twice. "I cannot spare the minutes."

Incentive to work on my own fic, which has now hit an amazing 475 words. I did make a pretty picture, though.

And on that note, I will shamelessly broach the topic of part to the Winchester/BAU epic - y/n?

Reply

jujuberry136 January 30 2010, 18:09:06 UTC
Twilight digs will never get old. NEVER!

Bobby and Rossi... I have an idea for an interlude for the two of them (to explain the throwaway line in the fic) but it needs more time to percolate. Someday maybe.

How could I not have Reid have read the SPN books? I mean seriously, WAY too much fun to pass up.

Reid and Prentiss, nerdy BFFs extraordinaire is kind of my OTP. I keep coming back to it in a lot of my fics. There's just something that seems to right about it (not to mention fun).

Castiel and cell phones, a love story of epic proportions. The SPN writers started it, I am duty bound to continue it.

WRITE YOUR FIC! WRITE IT!!!

*feeds your bunnies approximately one ton of carrots*

And on that note, I will shamelessly broach the topic of part to the Winchester/BAU epic - y/n?

Sorry, confused. Did you mean part two? And if so, don't you mean part three? I thought this was part two...

Reply


liliaeth January 29 2010, 19:23:56 UTC
this is soooooo awesome and I love your Castiel :-)

Reply

jujuberry136 January 30 2010, 01:00:19 UTC
I'm glad you liked it!

Castiel was so much fun to write, I'm glad you enjoyed reading him!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reply


ybkaren January 29 2010, 20:47:34 UTC
Oh man you're awesome! I love that you made the villain human this time. And that Reid read Chucks book. I totally LOL.
That was some great interaction between the characters.
Awe Reid is becoming a bit of a hunter. That was super cute ending.
Great Great work. Even better than the last.

Reply

jujuberry136 January 30 2010, 01:03:41 UTC
It only seemed fair to have a human villain this time after the explosion of monsters that happened last time. Of course, I couldn't let the humans have all the fun...

And Reid is totally a Chuck fangirl.

Thanks so much for all your kind words! I was freaking out a lot while writing this because I wanted to live up to the first one and I'm glad the sequel surpassed it in your view.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Reply


annj_g80 January 29 2010, 21:24:10 UTC
*snortrofles*

Seriously, those Sam&Castiel scenes were hilarious. And I kinda liked the chemistry between Prentiss and Dean. Especially when they were giddy with cold *giggles*

Thanks for the sequel. I really enjoyed it a lot.

Reply

jujuberry136 January 30 2010, 01:05:51 UTC
*glomps*

Sam and Cas always seem to get shortchanged in the show, so I thought they deserved some quality time together. And Cas is hilarious.

Dean and Prentiss told *lots* of stories during their hug a tree time. Which they will never reveal to anyone else upon the threat of death.

I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reply


faithburke January 30 2010, 00:35:44 UTC
This made a miserable week much, much better. Wonderful story, loved the characterizations, and I love that you highlight little-noticed but lovely aspects of all the characters.

Reply

jujuberry136 January 30 2010, 01:06:57 UTC
I'm glad this improved your week.

Thanks so much for your kind review and thanks for reading!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up