Burn so brightly: The Untold tales: 01

[judin]

Elfladyarwen wondered if I could post the discarded scenes here on livejournal as well as on tumblr, and that I can:

Not sure if there is any kind of market for this, but I thought I would share some discarded bits from "Burn so Brightly", so you guys can see how the story has evolved over time.

For one thing, instead of self-mutilation in chapter 5

Comments

[robynize]

I am choking on the beauty of this. Simply gorgeous, vivid imagery. God but you really portrayed Dean's fear of being laid bare like this, and yet wanting it so much. Love, the light said. *sighing so dreamily*
and this line
Sam and Castiel found the lace in Dean Winchester where he loved, and they shook with joy to find there images mirrored there
*facepalm* Good GOD what are you DOING to me and my heart??? Please do more of these, they are beautiful!
Seriously, how do you do this????
I am so hooked and whipped by you and this fic
♥Robyn