Supernatural: Burn so brightly: Chapter 1/8

[judin]

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[mulder200]

Oh yeah! God knows exactly what he is doing.

And Dean is a great babysitter. Little Cas is so sweet!

[judin]

Chuck has plans. He just likes to pretend he doesn't. ;)

Thank you! I'm so glad you took the time to leave me a comment. :D

[nenja_black]

I like how Cas tries to make things better, but lots of people suffer because of it. Hmm, where does that road paved with good intentions go?

Despite the things happening, Chuck’s writing is difficult to take seriously. I think it’s the language, the way he phrases things, or something. It was nice to read, but I was grateful for the shift over to normal.

“Don’t feed him after midnight,” XD Oh Gabriel, how I love thee.

I love how Gabriel came back just to say ‘Good Luck’, and then disappeared again.

Surely not Zachariah. Dean really hoped God had not resurrected Zachariah. I laughed a great deal at that one.

Gabriel came, saw, conquered and left before you could get a word in. - Favorite line.

I’m responsible, Sam! But I don’t want to be responsible alone. - “I’m not going to be a single father, you’re raising this kid with me!”

Mercifully dead to the hideous wallpaper and horrendous bedcovers of this crappy motel room. - No, I take it back. THIS is my favorite line!

Sam had slept like a baby every since. - So Sam wakes

[judin]

I'm a firm advocate of the "Castiel is misguided, not evil"-line. Of course I haven't seen the first episode yet, so I don't know if canon agrees with me or not.

Chuck is ... not a good writer. His prose is a little romance novel, a little melodramatic (much like mine before I'm betaed).

Gabriel is an asshole. I love him.

Castiel is Sam and Dean's love child. Oh yeah.

No, Sam doesn't wake ... That wasn't what I ... Yes. Yes, Sam wakes up and cries, and Dean has to rock him to sleep and sometimes bottle feed him. :P

It has changed indeed, and that has rippled across the other chapters, so you will find some new stuff, and of course you haven't read the ending yet. Because it isn't done. *kremtkremt*

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[nenja_black]

You know what they say, people using the expression 'sleep like a baby', has never had a baby themselves.

Credit is nice! It leads to my place! :D

Oooooooh, ending not finished? Then you got a clock ticking on you.

[verucasalt123]

What an amazing story...I look forward to the future installments.

[judin]

"Amazing"? O_O

I'm just going to go over there and hide my blushing face in a pillow for a while.

Thank you! X3

[verucasalt123]

No hiding. Keep writing, you.

[judin]

Great advice! I will. :P

[judin]

They actually caved pretty quickly in the first draft, until Aevylonya pointed out how weird that was. This story would be so horrible without her.

Dean totally would use Cas to flirt. He's such a dog.

I really appreciate you taking the time to comment! See you in a week. ;D

[stella_owned]

Awww, this is so bitter-sweet. I'm in love with baby cas and really hope Sam'll come around.
Great story so far!

[judin]

It's only going to get more bitter (and hopefully sweeter as well) from here.
As for Sam, we shall have to see in the next chapter. ;D
Thank you!