A Useless Realization || Zelos & Kratos

[judgemenottoday]

“You shouldn’t be telling me this,” the auburn-haired man coolly stated.

“I know,” the younger man chimed. “I’m not supposed to be telling anyone about this… but it’s a heavy realization,” he meekly admitted with darkening expression. “I’ve always had my doubts, but it’s… hard to take it down alone when-”

“I’m still under the employment of

Comments

[kurai007]

There were two typos here, but I didn't keep track of them by C/Ping. ._. -checks over-
-> and fiddled with is thumbs ; 'his'

Or maybe I was just imagining things, cause I can't see it again. >_> Anyway, onto the story.

At sometimes, I was kinda confused on who was saying what. Like, for example, from Zelos' "To be honest" to the "They were all females" part. "Second" should still be part of the same paragraph. Unless it was Kratos speaking at that time.

Same with the "Something is happening" part to "Haha, this is so unlike me".

Anywho, that's some food for thought, ain't it Zelos? The whole finding out they were all females, and the seals. I also like the analogy you used at the end: the Christmas present. Pretty good.

Dude, it's good to see something from you before shit starts. =D Shit being class. Haha, I'll still be watching, of course.

[daruki]

Fixed... I think. ~_~; That's what I get for writing and posting on the same day, orz.

Thank you, ;-; But dialog confusion set aside (Zerozero did most of the talking though, I think you noticed), did the actual concept confuse you? XD; I know someone that has been, >>; I know it's a bit of a pointless drabble about a pointless conversation, but... yeah. ;;; "Useless" and "Worthless" didn't surface one in the fic itself, but can you tell that it's all over it? ;;;

I'll stop trying to sound deep now, >_>; Thanks again. ;____;

[kurai007]

Confuse me? Well, I understood it on the most basic level--Zelos' realization over the whole way Cruxis is doing things and all. But haha, oh, you underestimate my simplistic way of thinking.

Of course I didn't, because I hardly ever look for an underlying theme. =D But since you've mentioned it, I do now.

[daruki]

Well, taking in account that Collet is the perfect Chosen, they wouldn't care how defect Tethe'Alla's Chosen is and don't even try to cover any suspicions - because all they need is Sylvarant's. Zelos basically comes to the realization that he's totally useless; his title is literally empty because there is nothing for a Chosen to DO in Tethe'Alla. >_>;

And well... Kura has to sit though it all despite knowing all of this far better than Zero could ever dream to. Some irony too, maybe even dramatic, orz.

I'll stop posting pointless ficlets now, >O>;