dh fic - Breaking Free 6

[jubileerain]

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Thanks for reading! I think I'll have the next chapter up by Monday. . .hopefully.

Comments

Acheron and Kat

[angel6157]

PHEW!!!!!! DAMM GIRL!!! THIS IS WHAT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR. FINALLY, SOME GOOD ACTION. I MUST SAY THAT THIS IS DEFINITELY ONE OF THE MOST HOTTEST SCENES I'VE EVER READ. (not to mention a little steamy)Phew!! HANDS DOWN, BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!!
YOU DID AN AWESOME JOB GIRL!!! I'M KINDA SAD THAT YOU'RE ALMOST GOING TO END THIS BUT OH WELL ALL THING MUST COME TO AN END.
WHEN CAN WE EXPECT ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER? HOPE SOON!!
YOU ROCK GIRL!!! AND THANKS.

o^^o

[jubileerain]

LOL I think this is as hot as it gets, they still go at it, but things are more toned down ^^;;

Re: o^^o

[angel6157]

Hey girl! I was hoping if you could add one last love scene to the story. I have to admit this was a very hot scene and to think that all Ash did was to bite Kat, imagine what more can he do.
If these 2 don't end up together in the AG version, just give us something good to remember.
THAT'LL BE NICE. OH! WHEN WILL YOU POST THE NEXT CHAPTER? I CAN'T WAIT!!

uhhh

[jubileerain]

Um Angel, there are more love scenes. Just 1 or 2. When I said this fic is plotless & somewhat smutty, I meant it LOL I hope you guys will be satisfied in the end. There are still a few chapters to go, I just wanted you guys to know there won't be much plot from here on in. Maybe 3 or more chapters & it's over.

[gargoyles_rock]

Now things are heating up and getting even better.

[jubileerain]

thanks ^^ they cool down. . . eventually -_^

[evalize]

Hey Jub! It's Evalize from the BBS. Awesomely hot! I hope Kat curbs his arrogance, though; show him who's boss.

Keep it up, ja?

See you around~

[jubileerain]

LOL Acheron is bossy isn't he ^^;;; I'll try my best! =D

[anonymous]

*Frantically waving fan on flushed face*, Sheesh! S.T.E.A.M.Y!! Great work, keep it up! Oh and i love the romance beginnings from the other chapters too.

[jubileerain]

o^^o thanks! I wanted their first sexual encounter to be hot. I'm glad you guys thought so. I was nervous it wouldn't be hot enough. =D

[anonymous]

woohooo!!! this is good!!!!!

[jubileerain]

thanks ^^