Prompt!Fic: Georgian Air.

[jtiberiuskirk]

Prompt: Bones's favorite memory with Jim is when they he woke up really early, before the sun had come up. He figures Jim looks too cute curled up making snuffling noises while he sleeps. So Bones wakes him up with kisses and cuddles and they watch the Georgia sunrise together :') 
Excerpt: The line of his lips makes his heart stutter in his chest.

Comments

Wow

[icegreen89]

You write heartbreakingly well. I don't really know if that is a proper adjective, but seriously. I wish I had your talent.

Re: Wow

[jtiberiuskirk]

I saw this comment, and I literally just stared for a few minutes.
This was really lovely to get, you've made my day. Thank you for taking the time to send this, it means a lot to me.
As for the talent - I hardly think I'm all that talented (although I've been told I'm terrible at taking compliments), it comes with a hellovalot of re-writes.
Much love, really,
-J.

Re: Wow

[icegreen89]

I think, in everyday life, we all have fleeting moments of joy, sadness, heartbreak and grief... and I do think that the last three are not synonyms. I also think that we don't pay much attention to them when they occur, but very often they are the reason we say we had a good or bad day. Or I do.

You find those moments.

I have favourite lines from this story, but the way it has been written, I am sure that when I read it again, I will have more to add to that list.

Rewriting is natural. I don't write any more, but when I did I re- re- re- re-----rewrote, many times over. My results were never as good as yours :)

I wish you would write more about these two (your Jim and your Bones), and I hope you write sequels to all your stories.

[corsiva]

This is such a lovely story, especially on a dark, rainy morning like I'm having. Thank you for sharing it!