fic for i_am_zan

Jun 29, 2008 21:02

Title: Slow Kisses
Rating: R
Threesome: ohno/nino/jun
Summary: Sometimes, Jun just needs to be reminded about what is really important.
Warnings: none.
Notes: For i_am_zan. I hope this isn't too far from what you wanted.

Slow Kisses )

ohno/nino/matsujun, !rating: r

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Comments 16

anonymous June 30 2008, 04:29:47 UTC
Author, I am completely, helplessly, in love with you. Perfect, for Jun. Perfect.

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starsystems July 11 2008, 19:02:11 UTC
Thank you, anonymous person. ^^

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trickylady June 30 2008, 04:41:20 UTC
all the ways I love these three.
They fit together so perfectly.

Your characterizations couldn't be any better, it was just amazing.

I really enjoyed it. (bows)

I'm memming this too. ♥

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starsystems July 11 2008, 19:01:49 UTC
Thanks! I'm happy people liked it because I pretty much hated it when I finally finished it. XD;

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waxrose June 30 2008, 04:44:41 UTC
Ajfjfkjasj;jdk. This. ♥

This is really just so beautiful and not only because it's hot as hell, but because it touches on Jun's insecurities and shows Arashi in a more complicated, entwined manner than bffs-forever-omg. And the Nino/Jun interaction is just amazing. You have my undying love for writing this fic. FOREVER. ♥ ♥ ♥

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starsystems July 11 2008, 19:03:05 UTC
I THINK THIS MIGHT BE MY FAVOURITE COMMENT EVER.
♥ ♥ ♥

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crazychickencow June 30 2008, 06:31:29 UTC
jajsf;j;a ♥ ♥ ♥ SOMUCHLOVE.

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starsystems July 11 2008, 19:03:30 UTC
:D ♥

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i_am_zan June 30 2008, 14:07:55 UTC
OH my .... this was written for me? Really? Like really really? It's like someone went inside my brain to see the Jun I see took him out put them where he belongs, and reminded him that he isn't alone really. Really really.

... and the characterisations are perfect and so them *looks sideways at author X* Hmmm I will reserve judgement till the big reveal... if there ever is one.

Sho tells things to Ohno and Ohno tells things to Nino. That's how it works. It is how it works. It definitely is. I love this sentence that is truth.

I love it all really but that one jumped out at me with Aiba waving banners and fireworks.

..and Nino, Oh Nino:

Just like when Nino composes songs and you aren't quite sure where they come from, what is he hiding inside himself to be able to do that.

his dark eyes, as unreadable as always. They are like glass, with highlights that are always somehow off, the secrets behind them perfectly guarded. Eyes of a liar or an actor, or someone just like Jun. Still, that man is one of the few people Jun trusts, ( ... )

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starsystems July 11 2008, 19:47:07 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! :D I was nervous. XD

Thanks for the lovely comment. And thanks for requesting this threesome, since it's one of my favourites too! So this was really fun to write (lol, most of the time xD)!

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