fic for the_suit_case

Jun 26, 2008 17:55

Title: This is Love
Rating: PG-13
Threesome: KoyamaxRyoxShige (with NewSxNewS thrown in)
Summary: Koyama wants to fall in love.
Warnings: Rambling and OOC? Also, 7,637 words.
Notes: For the_suit_case! Sorry I couldn’t work in all of your stipulations; I honestly tried. And failed. Hope this is at least a little bit enjoyable anyway.

This is Love )

!rating: pg13, koyama/ryo/shige

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cynicalism June 26 2008, 23:04:14 UTC
HI ANON-SAN, I HAVE A FEELING I KNOW WHO YOU ARE BUT EVEN IF I'M WRONG OH MY GOD THIS IS POSSIBLY THE MOST ADORABLE AND HILARIOUS THING I HAVE EVER READ. I just jlksdsad I was grinning like a moron and gushing throughout this entire thing. I--am so in love with your Koyama. His thought process and his earnest desire for NewS to fall in love with each other and the way he tries so hard and yet is so oblivious anyway. And, well actually I just love how you wrote all the members, they are so perfectly written and so perfectly true to character. And I love the way Koyama describes falling in love with each of them, and how the others fall in love with each other, and the fireworks and sajkldjad pretty much everything about this fic is so amazing that I would quote, only I'm pretty sure I'd break the comment limit if I tried.

♥♥♥

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peroxidepest17 July 11 2008, 02:41:10 UTC
HAHA I GUESS IT WAS OBVIOUSLY ME WASN'T IT.

WITH THE WHOLE PUTTING IN TEGO LOTS EVEN THOUGH THE RECIPIENT WANTED ME TO AVOID HIM. >>

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cynicalism July 11 2008, 02:46:49 UTC
actually--it hadn't fully hit me till i came to the "END" in bolded letters. is that weird? LOL. uhm. i read too much of your fic, obv.

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peroxidepest17 July 11 2008, 03:00:27 UTC
LOL I CANNOT BE THE ONLY ONE WHO DOES THAT.

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stigma2008 June 27 2008, 00:37:29 UTC
wow... that was sooo cute.. and touching.... thank you..

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peroxidepest17 July 11 2008, 02:41:40 UTC
Glad you liked! ^_^

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the_suit_case June 27 2008, 04:16:20 UTC
: ))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Your Koyama. Oh man, how I love him. He is so clueless and sweet. And your Ryo and Shige. Oh god, how awesomely they argue.

This is hilarious and lovely. The group interactions, amazing. I just love how they all interact. It felt very much how I picture News.

Just. : ))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Thank you so much, Anon-san! I really appreciate all the effort you put into this. Totally awesome. : )))))))))))))))))

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peroxidepest17 July 11 2008, 02:42:19 UTC
Relieved you did not hate this, you have no idea. LOL THE TORMENT, THE TORMENT. I tried avoiding Tegoshi like you wanted but I just. I couldn't.

He is my heart and soul in this fandom.

<3

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the_suit_case July 11 2008, 07:29:41 UTC
I will be honest with you. The second I read after that Koyama realizes that falling in love with Tegoshi is easy too... I stopped reading. I was like, no way. People are not allowed to be in love with Tegoshi. He's twelve. TWELVE. Then I flailed around my apartment like I typically do when people are... doing bad things to Tegoshi's image in my brain until my roommate came home and read it and told me it was safe. I have such set beliefs in Tego, that I hate reading other people's fic involving him because he's twelve and adorable and oh god, I hate when most people write him because he is not twelve and adorable.

So, even though he was in it, he was twelve-ish and adorable, and I am okay with that. I am completely okay with your Tegoshi. And that. Is saying a lot. It just took me a while to stop being ridiculous and read it.

Tegoshi's my heart and soul in this fandom too.

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fireflychen June 27 2008, 18:03:55 UTC
ILU ANO SAN! :DDD Koyama's plans were all hilarious and omg, I love how your described the member-ai between Ryo and Shige! One of the most adorable and funniest fics I've ever read! Your Koyama is ♥

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peroxidepest17 July 11 2008, 02:42:48 UTC
Writing entirely from Koyama's perspective was a lot harder than I thought it would be. I GUESS I WILL HAVE TO PRACTICE MORE.

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peroxidepest17 July 11 2008, 02:43:05 UTC
YAY HEARTS. TNK YOU BB.

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