fic for lonelybusiness

Jul 07, 2008 01:54

Title: Sweet Plum Wine
Rating: NC-17
Threesome: Kame/Yamapi/Jin
Summary: “Are we friends, or are we not? / You told me once, but I forgot / Tell me now, and tell me true…”
Warnings: Rampant abuse of quotes, ridiculous emotionalism, random author pontification, unhappy sex…
Notes: I hope you enjoy lonelybusiness! Thanks to sollasollew11 for an amazing beta job! Any coherency ( Read more... )

jin/kame/yamapi, !rating: nc-17

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gingifere July 7 2008, 17:37:39 UTC
I loved this :( I love your style, the way we get an insight into all three characters heads. I love how they're so complex, so confused and unsure of each other. I especially love the way you developed Kamepi's relationship and how Yamapi started off 'hating' Kame but slowly realised he felt something more. I love your jealous!Jin, how Yamapi is aware that Kame is 'his' but for once he's willing to fight Jin for him.

I also loved your KAT-TUN dynamics, the way that they aren't the best of friends but they look after one another in the ways that count.

I really enjoyed this ♥ ♥

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inkanaitis July 15 2008, 01:54:44 UTC
thank you! *is so so flattered*

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

figuring out a workable threesome damn near killed me :)

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tretton July 7 2008, 19:16:40 UTC
This was brilliant. Brilliant.

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inkanaitis July 15 2008, 01:56:14 UTC
thank you!

and thank you for the rec as well!

I'm glad you thought it was a worthwhile read!

<3

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ayuzak July 8 2008, 05:38:16 UTC
I love your writing style, it flows with the mood and story very well.
Thank You!

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inkanaitis July 15 2008, 01:56:48 UTC
thank you!

I'm glad you liked it! :)

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kt_kitt July 8 2008, 13:40:15 UTC
It´s amazing!! Thanks!!! love it!

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inkanaitis July 15 2008, 01:57:46 UTC
your welcome and thank you!

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inkanaitis July 15 2008, 01:57:57 UTC
*facepalm*

you're

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marinamirabella July 8 2008, 16:44:28 UTC
WOW THAT WAS GREAT! Thank you so much. I love every bit of it, especially minute details about KAT-TUN's life, and how you weave three points of view together. Juts LOVE this fic!

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inkanaitis July 15 2008, 01:58:50 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad the details weren't too clogging!

:)

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